Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more clear and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'funny stating fee'. Use simple and direct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Example: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy reading and then summarizing articles in my own words. This helps me understand the content better.

Suggestion: Focus on organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid hesitation sounds and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I like to write articles and summaries because it helps me improve my vocabulary and understanding. Also, writing is a relaxing activity for me.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing sentences. Use linking words to explain your thoughts logically and be specific about how your writing changes.

Example: Yes, the things I write change over time because I often rewrite articles and stories in my own words to better understand them and create new versions.

Suggestion: Try to express your preference clearly and avoid repeating filler words. Use linking words to explain reasons for your choice.

Example: I usually prefer handwriting because it feels more personal, but sometimes I type because it is faster for writing long summaries.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using correct grammar and clearer sentences. Explain how keeping a diary helps you with specific examples.

Example: I keep a diary every day because it helps me remember important events. For example, yesterday I wrote about my shopping trip, which helped me recall what I bought.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with clear sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how these methods help you remember your life.

Example: I often record my life by taking photos and videos. Also, spending time with friends and talking about past experiences helps me remember important moments.

× Yes, I am into writing aloud and uh, it's a funny stating fee for me and I love to write and read and then take out the summary in my own words.

✓ Yes, I am into writing aloud and uh, it's a funny starting fee for me and I love to write and read and then take out the summary in my own words.

The word 'stating' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'starting' which is a verb + -ing form used as an adjective. The error is due to confusion between similar sounding words. To improve, learn the correct verb forms and their meanings.

× I like to uh, like previously I was reading one article then I can work into in my own words and it was.

✓ I like to uh, like previously I was reading one article then I could work it into my own words and it was.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used with past tense context; 'could' is appropriate. Also, 'work into in' is incorrect; it should be 'work it into'. The error is mixing modal verb usage and verb + -ing form. To improve, match modal verbs with correct tense and use correct verb phrases.

× I like to write certain things, some is like, uh, I can say articles and like to memorize them in my own words, which improve my understanding vocabulary uh, likes before in a few times ago, I was working on the book to write in my own words, uh, and also uh, umm, writing is also a relaxing activity for me.

✓ I like to write certain things, some are like, uh, I can say articles and like to memorize them in my own words, which improves my vocabulary understanding. A few times ago, I was working on a book to write in my own words, uh, and also uh, umm, writing is also a relaxing activity for me.

The phrase 'likes before in a few times ago' is incorrect; it should be 'A few times ago'. Also, 'improve my understanding vocabulary' is incorrect; it should be 'improves my vocabulary understanding'. Prepositions and word order are misused. To improve, learn correct prepositional phrases and word order.

× Yes I believe that the thing I write would change you because I certain of time I change many things such as like articles, novels and many books that are being can be functional books and non fictional book stories.

✓ Yes, I believe that the things I write would change because I, at certain times, change many things such as articles, novels and many books that can be functional books and non-fictional stories.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'many things'. Also, 'being can be' is incorrect; 'can be' suffices. 'Non fictional book stories' should be 'non-fictional stories'. The error is singular/plural mismatch and incorrect verb phrase. To improve, ensure subject and object number agreement and correct verb usage.

× I memorize them in my own words and make the small books or stories from it.

✓ I memorize them in my own words and make small books or stories from them.

'The small books' is incorrect if not previously specified; 'small books' is better. Also, 'from it' should be 'from them' to agree with plural 'books or stories'. The error is incorrect use of articles and pronouns. To improve, match pronouns and articles with the nouns they refer to.

× Most of the time I like to prefer handwriting, but it's something like uh, uh, a little, uh, tough to write and long to make the summary from it.

✓ Most of the time I prefer handwriting, but it's a little tough to write and takes long to make the summary from it.

'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices. Also, 'long to make the summary' is awkward; 'takes long' is better. The error is incorrect conjunction and redundant verb usage. To improve, avoid redundant phrases and use correct conjunctions.

× I would also prefer to write on hand tapping or writing, so it's a depend on my.

✓ I would also prefer to write by hand or typing, so it depends on me.

'On hand tapping or writing' is incorrect; correct prepositions are 'by hand' or 'typing'. 'It's a depend on my' is incorrect; correct is 'it depends on me'. The error is incorrect preposition and pronoun use. To improve, learn correct prepositional phrases and pronouns.

× I like to keep Diaries as per daily of my day.

✓ I like to keep diaries daily.

'As per daily of my day' is incorrect and redundant. 'Keep diaries daily' is concise and correct. The error is incorrect quantifier and phrase usage. To improve, use simple and correct quantifiers.

× It's a very helpful for me like yesterday when I was about to go to some shopping center and also shop grossly.

✓ It's very helpful for me, like yesterday when I was about to go to a shopping center and also shop mostly.

'A very helpful' should be 'very helpful' without article. 'Some shopping center' should be 'a shopping center'. 'Shop grossly' is incorrect; likely 'shop mostly' or 'shop largely' is intended. The error is incorrect article and preposition use. To improve, use correct articles and prepositions.

× It's really helped me to see the daily.

✓ It really helped me to see the daily events.

'See the daily' is incomplete; 'daily events' or 'daily activities' is needed. Also, 'It's really helped' should be 'It really helped' for past tense. The error is incorrect verb tense and incomplete phrase. To improve, complete phrases and match verb tense to context.

× I use most of the time online videos or taking photos also umm spending good time with my friends and talking to them and this way we usually talk about previous things in our life.

✓ Most of the time, I use online videos or take photos, also spend good time with my friends and talk to them, and this way we usually talk about past things in our lives.

'I use most of the time online videos or taking photos' is awkward; better is 'Most of the time, I use online videos or take photos'. 'Previous things in our life' should be 'past things in our lives'. The error is incorrect preposition and verb form. To improve, use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× When we are discussing for the new communications and we are talking so our by watching all photos and videos we memorize our own.

✓ When we discuss new communications and talk, by watching all photos and videos, we memorize our own memories.

'Discussing for' is incorrect; 'discuss' without 'for' is correct. 'So our by watching' is incorrect conjunction and phrase. The error is incorrect conjunction and sentence structure. To improve, use correct conjunctions and sentence structure.