Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и повторяется. Лучше использовать более простые и прямые выражения, избегая излишней формальности и повторов. Например, можно сказать, что вы много пишете из-за учебы и это помогает вам учиться.

Example: Yes, I write a lot because I have many assignments and notes to take for my studies. Writing helps me remember what I learn each day.

Suggestion: Ответ немного запутанный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более чётко и логично, использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Также стоит избегать лишних деталей, если они не помогают понять ответ.

Example: When I am bored, I like to write stories. For example, I once wrote a story about a girl who loved to draw and later moved to London. Writing stories helps me be creative.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит хорошие идеи, но есть ошибки в грамматике и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности и ясности.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will change. When I was young, I wrote about dreams and imaginary things, but as I grow older, my writing becomes more realistic and focused on real experiences.

Suggestion: Ответ не очень ясный и содержит много повторов и неуместных слов. Рекомендуется чётко выразить предпочтения и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

Example: I like both typing and handwriting. When I write by hand, I enjoy my handwriting, but typing is faster and more convenient for chatting or writing quickly.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит ошибку и не отвечает на вопрос. Нужно использовать правильные слова и давать полный ответ, например, объяснить, что вы не ведёте дневник и почему.

Example: I don't keep a diary because I prefer to remember my experiences in my mind or share them with friends.

Suggestion: Ответ слишком короткий и не раскрывает тему. Рекомендуется расширить ответ, объясняя, как вы запоминаете события и почему не используете другие методы.

Example: I usually remember important events in my mind instead of writing them down. Sometimes I take photos or use my phone to record special moments.

× For sure, as a student, I write a lot because the writing is our duty.

✓ For sure, as a student, I write a lot because writing is our duty.

The definite article 'the' before 'writing' is unnecessary here because 'writing' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× It shows that we were on that day and it shows that we were present on that day.

✓ It shows that we were there on that day and it shows that we were present on that day.

The pronoun 'were' needs a complement to indicate location or presence. 'There' is the correct word to indicate presence at a place or event.

× When I'm bored I ask ChatGPT to give me an any ideas to write about and once we write it about one story called Home that was waiting.

✓ When I'm bored, I ask ChatGPT to give me some ideas to write about and once we wrote a story called 'Home That Was Waiting'.

The phrase 'an any ideas' is incorrect; 'some ideas' is appropriate for plural countable nouns. Also, 'write it about one story' is awkward; 'wrote a story' is clearer and fits past tense context.

× And this story started from a little girl who loved to draw and then it become a whole big story like about a girl who lives to London.

✓ This story started with a little girl who loved to draw and then it became a whole big story about a girl who lives in London.

The verb 'become' should be in past tense 'became' to match 'started'. Also, 'lives to London' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for location.

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

The modal verb 'would' is used for hypothetical situations, but here 'will' is appropriate to ask about future changes.

× Then step by step, day by day, when we start to grow up, I think we will not write down the things that we write wrote when we were young.

✓ Then step by step, day by day, when we start to grow up, I think we will not write down the things that we wrote when we were young.

The phrase 'write wrote' is incorrect; only the past tense 'wrote' is needed here.

× Actually, I like both of them. While I write by hand, I like my handwriting while I'm writing by chat.

✓ Actually, I like both of them. While I write by hand, I like my handwriting; while I'm chatting,

The phrase 'writing by chat' is awkward; 'chatting' is the correct verb form to describe informal online communication.

× Like chatting. I like the best of my hands, the rapid, the speed of my hands that I'm rapping.

✓ Like chatting. I like the best of my hands, the rapid speed of my hands when I'm typing.

The word 'rapping' is incorrect in this context; 'typing' fits the context of writing or chatting on a keyboard.

× I don't keep tires.

✓ I don't keep diaries.

The word 'tires' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'diaries', which is the correct word for personal journals.