Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: I live in a small village where the weather varies between hot and cold. Right now, it is raining, which makes the atmosphere peaceful and a bit chilly.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung, serta jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels more peaceful and comfortable compared to hot weather.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada pengulangan kata. Cobalah untuk menjawab langsung dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan alasan yang jelas.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I live in a country with only rainy and hot seasons, and I enjoy the rain more.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan tepat.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but I do check it before going on trips that take more than an hour.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan penjelasan yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang benar.

Example: I think climate change has made the earth hotter and drier in recent years, which affects our environment negatively.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda cukup jelas, tapi ada beberapa kesalahan kata dan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih tepat dan jelaskan alasan dengan lebih baik.

Example: Definitely yes. I want to visit countries like Japan or Korea to experience the four seasons, which we don't have in my country.

× I live in a small village in the corner of district and the weather in here is so just floating in between hot and cold.

✓ I live in a small village in the corner of the district and the weather here is just floating between hot and cold.

The phrase 'in the corner of district' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'district'. Also, 'in here' is incorrect; 'here' alone is sufficient. The preposition 'in between' should be 'between' when referring to two states. Correct use of prepositions and articles improves clarity.

× But right now it rained and the vibe is so just so peaceful and a bit cold because of the rain so.

✓ But right now it is raining and the vibe is just so peaceful and a bit cold because of the rain.

The phrase 'right now' indicates present continuous tense, so 'it rained' (past tense) is incorrect. It should be 'it is raining'. Also, the sentence ends awkwardly with 'so'; removing it improves sentence flow.

× I think that cold weather is more has peaceful vibe than hot weather so I choose to cold then very hot because I don't know it just feel like peaceful when in the cold weather.

✓ I think that cold weather has a more peaceful vibe than hot weather, so I choose cold over very hot because it just feels peaceful when in cold weather.

The phrase 'more has peaceful vibe' is incorrect; it should be 'has a more peaceful vibe'. Also, 'choose to cold then very hot' is incorrect; it should be 'choose cold over very hot'. The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I don't really know the answer because I live in trophy's country.

✓ I don't really know the answer because I live in a tropical country.

The word 'trophy's' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'tropical'. Correct word choice is important for clarity.

× That means there's no Four Seasons, it's just rain and hot and I prefer rain one.

✓ That means there are no Four Seasons; it's just rain and hot, and I prefer the rainy one.

'There's no Four Seasons' is incorrect because 'Four Seasons' is plural; it should be 'there are no Four Seasons'. Also, 'rain one' should be 'rainy one' to correctly use the adjective form.

× But if I have to try try our wet, I would like to just wet weather.

✓ But if I have to try wet weather, I would like just wet weather.

The phrase 'try try our wet' is unclear and likely a mistake. It should be 'try wet weather'. Also, 'like to just wet weather' is incorrect; it should be 'like just wet weather'.

× I don't really have that habit for checking the weather forecast, but if I want to go out like it's it needs more than an hour to go there, I would like to check it before I go.

✓ I don't really have the habit of checking the weather forecast, but if I want to go out and it takes more than an hour to get there, I would check it before I go.

The phrase 'habit for checking' should be 'habit of checking'. Also, 'like it's it needs' is incorrect; it should be 'and it takes'. Correct prepositions and conjunctions improve sentence clarity.

× But daily I don't really check it because there's nothing.

✓ But daily I don't really check it because there's nothing important.

The phrase 'there's nothing' is vague; adding 'important' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'daily' is better placed as 'I don't really check it daily' or 'I don't check it every day' for naturalness.

× I think that climate change in the recent years give an impact for our earth.

✓ I think that climate change in recent years has had an impact on our Earth.

'Give' should be 'has had' to agree with singular subject 'climate change' and to use present perfect tense for recent years. Also, 'for our earth' should be 'on our Earth'.

× More like full, more like it can more hot, hotter than before and it just make us feel so dry.

✓ It is more intense, it can be hotter than before, and it just makes us feel very dry.

The phrase 'more like full' is unclear; 'more intense' is clearer. 'More like it can more hot' is incorrect; it should be 'it can be hotter'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× What?

This interjection is unclear and unnecessary in this context; it can be omitted for clarity.

× 100% yes.

✓ Definitely yes.

'100% yes' is informal and not grammatically standard. Using 'Definitely yes' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× I want to go abroad so that I can feel Four Seasons that I can't fill in my own country because it has only two visions in a year.

✓ I want to go abroad so that I can experience the Four Seasons, which I can't feel in my own country because it has only two seasons in a year.

'Feel Four Seasons' should be 'experience the Four Seasons'. 'Fill' is incorrect; it should be 'feel'. 'Visions' is incorrect; it should be 'seasons'.

× So I want to visit Japan or Korea or any other country that has war season because I want to feel that way.

✓ So I want to visit Japan, Korea, or any other country that has four seasons because I want to experience that.

'War season' is incorrect; it should be 'four seasons'. Also, 'feel that way' is vague; 'experience that' is clearer.