Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: The weather in Ho Chi Minh City, where I live, is generally hot and humid throughout the year. It mainly has two seasons: the rainy season and the dry season. During the rainy season, it often rains heavily, while the dry season is usually sunny and warm.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp lại ý. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because it feels more comfortable to me. However, since Vietnam is mostly hot, I haven't had many chances to experience cold weather. If I could, I would like to live in a cooler climate.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

Example: I prefer dry weather because when it's too wet, I feel uncomfortable and bored. However, if the weather is too dry, it makes me feel tired. So, I like a balance between dry and wet weather.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning using the Yellow app, which is very popular in Vietnam. This helps me plan my day better and avoid unexpected weather conditions.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến có cấu trúc, sử dụng liên từ và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

Example: I think climate change has caused many problems recently, such as rising sea levels and more natural disasters. For example, Vietnam experienced severe floods two years ago, which affected many people and damaged property.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Korea. It is my dream country to visit and study abroad. I want to get used to the colder climate there to adapt better.

× I was born and raised in Ho Chi Minh City which is one of the vibrant cities in Vietnam and because I live in the South of Vietnam so it the weather is quite wet and humid on years around and also really it's separated by two seasons like rain and sunny.

✓ I was born and raised in Ho Chi Minh City, which is one of the vibrant cities in Vietnam. Because I live in the South of Vietnam, the weather is quite wet and humid throughout the year, and it is separated into two seasons: rainy and sunny.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and run-on structure. 'And because' and 'so it' are redundant and cause confusion. Breaking the sentence into two and using proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually I refer cold weather rather than hot weather, but I don't have any chances to experience the cold weather in Vietnam.

✓ Actually, I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather, but I don't have any chance to experience cold weather in Vietnam.

The verb 'refer' is incorrectly used instead of 'prefer'. Also, 'chances' should be singular 'chance' because it is used with 'any' in this context. Modal verb usage is not directly involved, but the verb choice is incorrect.

× So I am on the fence of cold and hot weather in my country.

✓ So I am on the fence about cold and hot weather in my country.

The phrase 'on the fence of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about'. This is a preposition error rather than modal verb usage, but it affects the sentence meaning.

× Hopefully I would refer try and also wet weather because if it is too dry it make me feel frustrated and exhausted all day.

✓ Hopefully, I would prefer dry and also wet weather because if it is too dry, it makes me feel frustrated and exhausted all day.

The verb 'refer' is incorrectly used instead of 'prefer'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The modal verb 'would' is acceptable here expressing preference.

× On the other hand that if it is the weather is so wet it makes me feel humid and also feel boring when doing a lot of things so I would combine.

✓ On the other hand, if the weather is too wet, it makes me feel humid and bored when doing a lot of things, so I would combine both.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and awkward phrasing. 'Feel boring' should be 'feel bored' because 'boring' describes things, 'bored' describes feelings. Also, 'that if it is the weather is' is redundant and incorrect.

× Yes, I have the habit of taking the weather forecast every day by the application of yellow which is one of the most prominent app application in Vietnam.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every day using the Yellow application, which is one of the most prominent apps in Vietnam.

The phrase 'taking the weather forecast' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'checking'. Also, 'by the application of yellow' is awkward; 'using the Yellow application' is better. 'App application' is redundant.

× By checking the weather forecast and I check it in every morning of daily basis, it can make me feel.

✓ I check the weather forecast every morning on a daily basis; it makes me feel informed.

The original sentence has incorrect adverb placement and incomplete thought. 'In every morning of daily basis' is incorrect; 'every morning on a daily basis' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'it makes me feel informed' completes the thought.

× Everything is I have I think there are lots of effects of climate change in the world like the rise sea levels and also some many disaster happens like in Vietnam two years ago that that happening lots of flood and also route in on my.

✓ I think there are many effects of climate change in the world, like rising sea levels and many disasters. For example, in Vietnam two years ago, there were many floods and landslides.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It has sentence structure errors, incorrect word order, and unclear phrases like 'route in on my'. Rewriting the sentence with clear structure and correct vocabulary improves clarity.

× Yes, if I had opportunities, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live like Korea, which is one of the most dream country that I want to visit and study abroad.

✓ Yes, if I had the opportunity, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, like Korea, which is one of the dream countries I want to visit and study abroad in.

'Opportunities' should be singular 'opportunity' in this context. 'Most dream country' is incorrect; 'dream countries' is correct. The modal verb 'would like' is used correctly here.

× So I want to accustom with this climate to adjust for the climate.

✓ So I want to get accustomed to this climate to adjust to it.

The phrase 'accustom with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get accustomed to'. Also, 'adjust for the climate' should be 'adjust to it'. Proper preposition use is important for clarity.