Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "in the morning and in the evening" followed by "but in the afternoon" without smooth linking. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and keep sentences shorter for clarity.

Example: I live in Brampton, where the weather is currently mild due to the seasonal shift. Mornings and evenings are chilly, but afternoons tend to be warm.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure to sound more natural.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it is better for my health. In winter, I often get sick and feel depressed, whereas summer feels comfortable and allows me to enjoy outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like "like" and improve sentence flow by linking ideas smoothly. Also, try to provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

Example: I enjoy both dry and wet weather, but I prefer wet weather because I love the rain. Since childhood, I've enjoyed playing and getting wet in the rain.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the message but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and smoother linking words to improve naturalness and clarity.

Example: Yes, since moving to Canada, I check the weather forecast daily before going outside because the weather changes frequently here. Back in India, I rarely checked it.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and lacks clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and organize your points logically with linking words. Also, be careful with accuracy; population growth affects climate indirectly, mainly through increased pollution and resource use.

Example: I believe climate change in Canada is mainly caused by pollution and increased population, including immigration, which leads to higher emissions and environmental impact.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like "he suggested me to visit there." Also, clarify your ideas for better coherence.

Example: One of my friends lives in Surrey, BC, and he suggested I visit. I did, and I really enjoyed the weather there compared to Brampton. I would consider moving there in the future.

× It's because of the seasonal shift and in the morning and in the evening it's more chilly and but in the afternoon it's hot.

✓ It's because of the seasonal shift, and in the morning and in the evening it's chillier, but in the afternoon it's hot.

The phrase 'more chilly' is incorrect because 'chilly' is a one-syllable adjective that forms its comparative by adding '-ier', so 'chillier' is correct. Also, the conjunction 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed to contrast the ideas.

× In the winter season it's more depressive to me as compared to the summer season where which in which I can.

✓ In the winter season, it's more depressing to me compared to the summer season, when I can.

The word 'depressive' is an adjective describing a person prone to depression, but here the correct adjective is 'depressing' to describe the season's effect. Also, 'where which in which' is redundant and incorrect; 'when' is the appropriate relative adverb to refer to time.

× Actually, I like both, but if I have to choose one, it's like wet weather is better because I like rain.

✓ Actually, I like both, but if I have to choose one, wet weather is better because I like rain.

The phrase 'it's like wet weather is better' is awkward and unnecessary. Removing 'it's like' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, when I moved in Canada heard the weather changes a lot.

✓ Yes, when I moved to Canada, I heard the weather changes a lot.

The preposition 'in' should be 'to' when referring to moving to a place. Also, the sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'heard'. Adding 'I' clarifies the sentence structure.

× When I used to live in India I never checked the weather forecast but here it's like daily I check the weather forecast before I go outside.

✓ When I used to live in India, I never checked the weather forecast, but here I check the weather forecast daily before I go outside.

The phrase 'it's like daily I check' is awkward. Removing 'it's like' and placing 'daily' after 'check' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think population is the main reason of the climate change here in Canada.

✓ I think the population is the main reason for climate change here in Canada.

The noun 'population' is singular and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific population. Also, 'reason of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'reason for'. 'Climate change' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× There's a lot of immigrants and other people.

✓ There are a lot of immigrants and other people.

The phrase 'There's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular. Since 'immigrants and other people' is plural, the correct form is 'There are'.

× Like one of my friends live in Surrey, BC and he suggested me to visit there and I did and I really found the weather great because as compared to Brampton.

✓ One of my friends lives in Surrey, BC, and he suggested that I visit there. I did, and I really found the weather great compared to Brampton.

'One of my friends live' should be 'lives' to agree with the singular subject. 'He suggested me to visit' is incorrect; the correct form is 'he suggested that I visit'. Also, 'because as compared to' is awkward; 'compared to' suffices.