Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然，且信息有些混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达冬天温暖，夏天温度不高的特点。

Example: The weather in Chengdu, where I study, is quite pleasant. Winters are warm, and summers are not very hot.

Suggestion: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，且用词不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明喜欢冷天气的原因。

Example: I prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating. Cold weather is better for my health, and I often feel dehydrated in hot temperatures.

Suggestion: 回答内容不够清晰，逻辑混乱，表达不准确。建议明确表达喜欢干燥天气的原因，并避免重复和语法错误。

Example: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable. Also, my skin reacts better to dry conditions than to wet weather.

Suggestion: 表达不够流畅，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，清楚说明习惯和原因。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day because it often rains where I live. I want to know if I need to bring an umbrella.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，改善句子连贯性。

Example: Climate change has caused more frequent extreme weather, such as floods and typhoons. Also, summer temperatures have become very high, making air conditioning essential.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达想去不同气候城市的愿望，并说明原因。

Example: Yes, I want to experience different climates. For example, I would like to visit Hainan city in Heilongjiang province because I enjoy snow, which is rare in my hometown.

× Well, the weather in Chengdu, where the place I study in university is quite great here and it was quite warm in the winters and the temperature is not very high in the summer.

✓ Well, the weather in Chengdu, where the place I study at university is quite great, and it is quite warm in the winter and the temperature is not very high in the summer.

这里“winters”应为单数形式“winter”，因为指的是冬季这个季节的整体情况。英语中季节通常用单数形式。

× That's because I'm a person who would like to sweating and I thought the cold weather is much great for my health and I and I always lack enough water especially in those hot under the hot temperatures.

✓ That's because I'm a person who would like to sweat and I think the cold weather is much better for my health and I always lack enough water especially under hot temperatures.

“would like to sweating”中“would like to”后应接动词原形“sweat”，而不是动名词“sweating”。此外，“thought”时态不合适，应为现在时“think”，因为表达的是一般事实。

× Well, I prefer dry weather than wet weather.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather to wet weather.

“prefer”后面比较时应使用“prefer A to B”结构，而不是“prefer A than B”。

× That's because drivers will always make people feel hotter than they're older than ordinary times.

✓ That's because drivers will always make people feel hotter than usual.

“older than ordinary times”表达不正确，应使用“than usual”表示“比平时更热”。

× Well, I I have a habit to check the weather's that because the place where I live always swim.

✓ Well, I have a habit of checking the weather because the place where I live always rains.

“have a habit to check”应改为“have a habit of checking”，动词习惯用法；“weather's that”不合适，应直接说“the weather”；“always swim”用词错误，应为“always rains”表示“经常下雨”。

× For example, extreme, more frequent extreme weather is one of its results and it's and such as the flaws and typhoons.

✓ For example, more frequent extreme weather is one of its results, such as floods and typhoons.

“flaws”应为“floods”，表示“洪水”，是复数形式；“extreme”重复且位置不当，去掉多余的“extreme”。

× And the second aspect is the extreme high, high temperatures in the summer vacations and we cannot live without air condition.

✓ And the second aspect is the extremely high temperatures in the summer vacation and we cannot live without air conditioning.

“extreme high”应为副词修饰形容词“extremely high”；“summer vacations”应为单数“summer vacation”；“air condition”应为“air conditioning”，表示空调设备。

× Yes, I would like would like to have a different experiences about other cities climates.

✓ Yes, I would like to have different experiences of other cities' climates.

“a different experiences”中“experiences”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”；“about”应改为“of”表示“关于”；“cities climates”应加所有格“cities' climates”。

× For example, I really like the city in in in Heilongjiang province, Hainan city because I like I I'm a person who was fond of snow, but I had seldom the opportunity to watch them in my hometown.

✓ For example, I really like the city in Heilongjiang province, Hainan city, because I am a person who is fond of snow, but I have seldom had the opportunity to see it in my hometown.

“was fond of”应为现在时“is fond of”，因为表达的是现在的喜好；“had seldom the opportunity”时态不对，应为现在完成时“have seldom had”；“watch them”用词不当，应为“see it”，指雪。