Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Tbilisi has a warm climate with cold winters and hot summers, which makes the weather quite pleasant overall.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoid repeating the word 'hot weather'. Also, keep your sentences concise and clear.

Example: I prefer hot weather since summer gives me more free time to enjoy outdoor activities with friends, although sometimes the heat can be hard to bear because it makes breathing difficult.

Suggestion: Good use of contrasting ideas. To improve, use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: I prefer wet weather when I want to stay home and read, however, if I have many tasks, dry weather is better for me.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your sentences more fluent. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words and correct grammar.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast for the next day because it helps me choose appropriate clothes and plan my activities, making my day more productive.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Climate change has caused many problems recently, such as natural disasters that have led to loss of lives. Therefore, it is important for us to address this serious issue.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'makes me feel aware'. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your feelings more clearly and naturally.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I visited Dubai, which is very hot. Although the heat was challenging, the constant sunshine made me feel happy and energized.

× Actually, Tbilisi is a very warm city, so the weather is good, winters are cold and the summers are hot.

✓ Actually, Tbilisi is a very warm city, so the weather is good; winters are cold and summers are hot.

The article 'the' before 'summers' is unnecessary because we are talking about summers in general, not specific summers. Also, a semicolon is better to separate independent clauses here.

× Actually, I prefer hot weather because hot weather is in summer and I have a lot of free time and I can enjoy being with my friends outdoors, but even though sometimes it's difficult to endure the heat because it's difficult to breathe.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather because hot weather is in summer, and I have a lot of free time, so I can enjoy being with my friends outdoors, but sometimes it's difficult to endure the heat because it's hard to breathe.

The sentence was too long and lacked proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Even though' was incorrectly used; 'but sometimes' is more appropriate. Also, 'difficult to breathe' is better expressed as 'hard to breathe' for naturalness.

× It depends on my mood because sometimes I like wet weather, being home reading books and doing nothing.

✓ It depends on my mood because sometimes I like wet weather, staying home, reading books, and doing nothing.

The phrase 'being home' is incorrect; the correct form is 'staying home' to express the action of remaining at home. Also, commas are needed to separate the gerund phrases.

× Usually I check weather for the next day because I have to choose my clothes, I have to plan my day.

✓ Usually I check the weather forecast for the next day because I have to choose my clothes and plan my day.

The article 'the' is needed before 'weather forecast'. Also, 'check weather' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather forecast'. The sentence also needed conjunction 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× So whether uh, forecast helps me uh, to make my day more productive?

✓ So the weather forecast helps me to make my day more productive.

The original sentence is a question but lacks proper structure and clarity. It should be a statement. Also, 'whether' is incorrect here; 'weather' is the correct word. Fillers like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× Climate change, climate change in recent years can change can make a lot of problems.

✓ Climate change in recent years can cause a lot of problems.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Can change can make' is incorrect; 'can cause' is the proper verb phrase. The repetition of 'climate change' is unnecessary.

× For example, there are a lot of natural disasters and because of that a lot of people die.

✓ For example, there are a lot of natural disasters, and because of them, many people die.

'Because of that' is vague; 'because of them' refers clearly to 'natural disasters'. Also, 'a lot of people' is acceptable but 'many people' is more formal and appropriate here.

× So it's very bad and we people should think about this problem.

✓ So it's very bad, and we people should think about this problem.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses. 'We people' is acceptable but could be better as 'we' or 'people like us' for clarity.

× Uh, yes, I would like to visit other cities and uh, I visited Dubai.

✓ Uh, yes, I would like to visit other cities, and I have visited Dubai.

The present perfect tense 'have visited' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now, especially since the speaker is talking about past experience relevant to the present.

× In Dubai it is very hot climate and it was difficult, but even though when the sun shines every day, no, it makes me feel aware, it makes me feel good and happy.

✓ In Dubai, it is a very hot climate, and it was difficult, but even though the sun shines every day, it makes me feel aware, good, and happy.

The article 'a' is needed before 'very hot climate'. The phrase 'even though when' is incorrect; 'even though the sun shines' is correct. Also, 'aware' is unclear here; possibly 'awake' or 'alert' is intended, but left as is due to lack of context. Commas are added for clarity.