Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлем құрылымы табиғи емес. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қосымша мәліметтерді байланыстыру сөздері арқылы қосыңыз.

Example: The weather where I live is usually sunny and warm, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities like camping and hanging out with friends.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда қайталанатын сөздер мен толық емес сөйлемдер бар. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, себептерді логикалық түрде байланыстырыңыз.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for me. In my country, the weather is often hot and sunny, which I don't like. I enjoy rainy and cloudy days because they feel fresh and relaxing.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда толық емес және грамматикалық қателер бар. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, себептерді толық және дұрыс сөйлемдермен түсіндіріңіз.

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable. When it is wet, my body feels sticky, and I don't like that feeling.

Suggestion: Жауабыңыз қысқа және толық емес. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, әдеттеріңіз туралы толық мәлімет беріңіз.

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I don't pay much attention to it. However, sometimes I check it before going out to prepare accordingly.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер және толық емес ойлар бар. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, әсерлерді толық және нақты түрде сипаттаңыз.

Example: I think climate change has caused severe weather conditions recently. For example, ice is melting rapidly, and many people are getting sick due to environmental changes.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді қолдануда қателер бар. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, себептерді логикалық түрде түсіндіріңіз.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. Since my country has both cold and warm weather, I want to visit warm and sunny places near the sea to enjoy a different environment.

× The weather is sunny and warm this it's a good weather to hang out in and doing camping.

✓ The weather is sunny and warm; this is good weather to hang out and go camping.

The phrase 'a good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'doing camping' should be 'go camping' to use the correct verb form after 'to'. The sentence is corrected to remove the article and fix the verb form.

× The weather is sunny and warm this it's a good weather to hang out in and doing camping.

✓ The weather is sunny and warm; this is good weather to hang out in and go camping.

After 'to' we use the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'doing camping' should be 'go camping'.

× I prefer cold weather because in our country it's so hot and sunny and I hate it.

✓ I prefer cold weather because in our country it is so hot and sunny, and I hate it.

The sentence is a run-on and needs a comma before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× So I love rainy days, cloudy days and it's so fresh when it's raining so I love.

✓ So I love rainy days and cloudy days; it's so fresh when it's raining, so I love it.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Adding 'it' at the end and connecting the ideas properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer dry weather because the wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like wet weather.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb to explain the reason. Adding 'I don't like' clarifies the meaning.

× In wet weather my body always sticky and I hate it.

✓ In wet weather, my body is always sticky, and I hate it.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'my body' to be grammatically correct.

× I'm not really fond of the, uh, checking the weather because I don't care about that.

✓ I'm not really fond of checking the weather because I don't care about that.

The definite article 'the' before 'checking the weather' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it makes the sentence correct.

× Climate change makes the weather worse ice melted and the people was sick and.

✓ Climate change has made the weather worse; ice has melted, and people have been sick.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly and has subject-verb agreement errors. Using present perfect tense 'has made', 'has melted', and 'have been' correctly reflects recent changes and plural subject agreement.

× Climate change makes the weather worse ice melted and the people was sick and.

✓ Climate change has made the weather worse; ice has melted, and people have been sick.

'People' is plural and requires the verb 'have' instead of 'was'. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation and conjunctions to separate ideas.

× I would umm yes I would visit other cities because my country is so cold and warm so I'd like to umm visit to warm and sunny places.

✓ I would, umm, yes, I would visit other cities because my country is so cold and warm, so I'd like to visit warm and sunny places.

The verb 'visit' is not followed by the preposition 'to'. Removing 'to' after 'visit' is correct.

× Where near the sea?

✓ Are they near the sea?

The original is a fragment and not a complete question. Adding the auxiliary verb 'Are' forms a proper question.