Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I live in the northern part of Vietnam, where the weather changes a lot throughout the year. There are four distinct seasons, including a cold winter and a hot summer. I enjoy both because I like experiencing different temperatures. For example, in winter, the temperature can drop quite low, while summer is usually very hot.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

Example: Although I enjoy both cold and hot weather, I prefer cold weather. I like wearing warm and cozy clothes in winter because they are stylish and comfortable. Moreover, I find it easier to sleep during cold nights, which helps me feel more refreshed the next day.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: Definitely, I prefer dry weather because it is easier to hang out with my friends. When it rains or the weather is wet, going out becomes inconvenient.

Suggestion: Bạn cần luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như 'uh'. Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: I don't check the weather forecast very often. Usually, I only check it before important events because I don't think the weather is a big problem every day.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

Example: Climate change is a serious issue nowadays because of pollution. In recent years, it has affected both people and the Earth in many ways, such as causing extreme weather and health problems.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến một cách mạch lạc và chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: No, I don't like visiting cities with different climates because it affects my health. I am prone to getting sick when the weather changes drastically.

× the weather change quite a lot throughout the year

✓ the weather changes quite a lot throughout the year

The subject 'weather' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'changes' to agree with the subject.

× There are 4 distinct seasons including a cold winter and a hot summer

✓ There are four distinct seasons including a cold winter and a hot summer

Numbers from one to ten are usually written in words in formal writing. Also, '4' should be written as 'four' for better style.

× For example, in winter the temperature can drop quite low while summer.

✓ For example, in winter the temperature can drop quite low, while in summer it is hot.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks parallel structure. Adding 'it is hot' after 'while in summer' completes the comparison and improves clarity.

× Besides, I find easier to sleep while during cold nights, which help me feel more refreshed than next day.

✓ Besides, I find it easier to sleep during cold nights, which helps me feel more refreshed the next day.

The pronoun 'it' is needed as the object of 'find'. 'While' is unnecessary before 'during'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which'. 'Than next day' should be 'the next day' for correct expression.

× Defiantly I think I really prefer dry weather because it's easier to hang out with my friend when dry weather because if they're a drain a rain or something wet I think going out is really unconvenient.

✓ Definitely, I think I really prefer dry weather because it's easier to hang out with my friends when the weather is dry. If there is rain or something wet, I think going out is really inconvenient.

'Defiantly' is a misspelling of 'Definitely'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general meaning. 'When dry weather' needs 'the weather is dry' for clarity. 'They're a drain a rain' is incorrect; it should be 'there is rain'. 'Unconvenient' is a misspelling of 'inconvenient'.

× just before importing, uh, event, uh, I, uh, I checked the weather forecast because, uh, every day I don't think weather is important is a problem.

✓ Just before an important event, I check the weather forecast because I don't think the weather is a problem every day.

'Importing' should be 'important'. 'An' is needed before 'important event'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× because of pollution, climate change is very, uh, seriously, uh, recent years

✓ Because of pollution, climate change has been very serious in recent years.

'Seriously' is an adverb but the adjective 'serious' is needed to describe 'climate change'. The tense is adjusted to present perfect to indicate ongoing effect.

× it really effect on people and, uh, uh, the earth, I think.

✓ It really affects people and the earth, I think.

The verb 'effect' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'affects' in third person singular form to agree with 'it'.

× if I visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, it really have impact on my health

✓ If I visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, it really has an impact on my health

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'an' is needed before 'impact'.

× because I really easy to be ill.

✓ because I am really prone to illness.

The phrase 'I really easy to be ill' is ungrammatical. It should be 'I am really prone to illness' or 'I get ill easily' to express the idea correctly.

× So I did like I don't like.

✓ So I don't like it.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Simplifying to 'So I don't like it' conveys the intended meaning clearly.