Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между предложениями и избегайте фрагментарных фраз.

Example: I live in Kazakhstan, where the weather varies a lot. For example, it often snows in autumn and spring, and the weather can change every hour. In summer, it is usually hot.

Suggestion: Старайтесь избегать повторений и говорите более связно. Объясните свои предпочтения с конкретными причинами и используйте правильные выражения.

Example: I prefer both cold and hot weather. In summer, I enjoy swimming, but I dislike insects. In winter, I love the Christmas atmosphere and the snow.

Suggestion: Избегайте повторений и говорите более чётко. Добавьте связующие слова и конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain and snow. For example, after it rains, I like the fresh smell of the streets.

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Избегайте пауз и заполнителей, говорите чётко и логично.

Example: I live in Almaty, where the weather changes a lot. Therefore, I check the weather forecast every day to plan my activities.

Suggestion: Старайтесь говорить более уверенно и избегать пауз. Используйте конкретные примеры и связные предложения.

Example: I believe climate change has many effects, such as the death of more animals in recent years. This makes me very sad.

Suggestion: Избегайте повторений и пауз. Говорите более связно, используя подходящие связующие слова и конкретные детали.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Egypt and Antarctica because I enjoy experiencing different climates. I am especially interested in cold places and unique hotels there.

× In Kazakhstan a lot of types of weather.

✓ In Kazakhstan, there are a lot of types of weather.

The sentence lacks the verb 'there are' to indicate existence. 'There be' structure is needed to express that many types of weather exist in Kazakhstan.

× In winter.

✓ In winter, the weather is cold.

The sentence fragment 'In winter.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and predicate. It should be a complete sentence describing winter weather.

× It's also snowing in autumn, raining and snowing in spring.

✓ It also snows in autumn, and it rains and snows in spring.

The original sentence uses continuous tense incorrectly for habitual weather patterns. Simple present tense is appropriate for habitual actions.

× Weather can change every hour.

✓ The weather can change every hour.

The noun 'weather' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to specific weather conditions.

× In summer only hot weather.

✓ In summer, there is only hot weather.

The sentence is a fragment missing a verb and subject. Adding 'there is' completes the sentence.

× I think I prefer both because in summer I feel uncomfortable and I and I afraid of insects.

✓ I think I prefer both because in summer I feel uncomfortable and I am afraid of insects.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'afraid' to form the correct present tense expression of feeling.

× But I like hot weather because I like swimming and we're hot clothes.

✓ But I like hot weather because I like swimming and wearing hot clothes.

The phrase 'we're hot clothes' is incorrect. It should be 'wearing hot clothes' to express the action of putting on clothes.

× In winter I like Christmas vibe and snow.

✓ In winter, I like the Christmas vibe and snow.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Christmas vibe' to specify the particular atmosphere.

× I prefer wet weather because I like raining and snowing, such as after raining I I like smell smell of streets.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like rain and snow; for example, after rain, I like the smell of the streets.

The verbs 'raining' and 'snowing' are incorrectly used as nouns. The correct nouns are 'rain' and 'snow'. Also, 'smell smell' is a repetition error.

× Is saying because I living in Almaty is a city when you, uh, think every day, uh, you uh, can't guess and uh, uh, look uh, for weather and uh, you uh, don't know, uh, what will uh, weather, uh, in our.

✓ I am saying that because I live in Almaty, which is a city where every day you can't guess the weather and you have to check the forecast because you don't know what the weather will be like.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms and sentence structure. It needs subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing.

× I think are the effect of climate, uh, change and change of everything.

✓ I think these are the effects of climate change and changes in everything.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper plural form. 'These are' is needed to introduce plural effects.

× more animals are dead, umm, in the, in uh, recent year.

✓ More animals have died in recent years.

The present perfect tense 'have died' is appropriate to describe events that happened over a recent period.

× I'm, I'm so sad about it.

✓ I am very sad about it.

The repetition 'I'm, I'm' is unnecessary and informal. 'Very sad' is clearer and more formal.

× Yes, I'd like to visit, uh, Egypt and Antarctica is very interesting for me.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit Egypt, and Antarctica is very interesting to me.

The sentence needs a conjunction and proper preposition 'to me' to express interest.

× Uh, I enjoy the umm, I enjoy cold, uh, places in the world.

✓ I enjoy cold places in the world.

The repetition and filler words should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× Umm, I like to visit the hotels and the coldest place in the world.

✓ I would like to visit the hotels in the coldest places in the world.

The sentence needs plural 'places' and preposition 'in' to be grammatically correct.