Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, complete your thoughts clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, explain what you mean by 'the vibes' and what you like about the rainy season specifically.

Example: In Indonesia, we have two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. I prefer the rainy season because I enjoy the fresh air and the calming sound of rain, which makes me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words and grammatical errors like 'helps a plane grow'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing, especially after it rains. Moreover, the cool temperature helps plants grow better, and the environment feels clean and fresh.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'the empowerment very support me'. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your example to your main point.

Example: I prefer wet weather because it helps improve my mood. For example, when it rains, I feel more focused and can study and complete my activities more effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I don't want to'. Also, reduce filler words and make your sentences more concise and natural.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going to campus on my motorcycle to avoid getting caught in the rain.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide more specific effects of climate change beyond personal mood, and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Climate change has several effects, including unpredictable weather patterns that can affect people's moods. For instance, unstable weather can make me feel anxious or unhappy at times.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'MMM snow season' and 'fibes environment'. Be specific about what you want to experience and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Absolutely, I would like to visit countries with snowy winters because Indonesia doesn't have snow. I want to experience the cold weather and see the beautiful snowy landscapes.

× Actually my country Indonesia has two uh, seasons such as dry season and rainy season, but I prefer to choose umm, uh, rainy season because I like the vibes.

✓ Actually, my country Indonesia has two seasons: the dry season and the rainy season, but I prefer to choose the rainy season because I like the vibes.

The phrase 'two uh, seasons such as dry season and rainy season' needs the definite article 'the' before 'dry season' and 'rainy season' to specify these particular seasons. Also, 'such as' is better replaced with a colon to list the two seasons clearly. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to choose cold weather because I like the vibes especially after the rain and not only that uh, rainy season can helps a plane grow and the last one is the environment after rain.

✓ I prefer to choose cold weather because I like the vibes especially after the rain and not only that, the rainy season can help plants grow, and the last one is the environment after rain.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. Therefore, 'can helps' is incorrect; it should be 'can help'. Also, 'a plane' is a mistake for 'plants'. This correction fixes verb form and noun errors.

× I prefer wet weather because umm the empowerment very support me to boost my mood.

✓ I prefer wet weather because the environment very supports me to boost my mood.

The word 'empowerment' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'environment'. Also, the verb 'support' needs to agree with the singular subject 'environment', so it should be 'supports'. This corrects noun choice and subject-verb agreement.

× Umm for example today is way today is wet weather and I can focus on my study and I can do my activities well.

✓ For example, today is wet weather and I can focus on my studies and do my activities well.

The phrase 'today is way today is wet weather' is unclear and redundant. It should be simplified to 'today is wet weather'. Also, 'study' should be pluralized to 'studies' to refer to academic work generally. This improves clarity and corrects plural usage.

× Yes I am because I am a student and I go to my campus with motorcycle and I always check it before I go to my campus because I don't want to uh, I don't want to get rain while I go to my campus.

✓ Yes, I am because I am a student and I go to my campus by motorcycle and I always check it before I go because I don't want to get caught in the rain while I go to my campus.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect when referring to transportation; 'by' is the correct preposition. Also, 'get rain' is incorrect; the phrase should be 'get caught in the rain'. These corrections fix preposition usage and idiomatic expressions.

× I think there are some reasons, uh, for uh, effect from climate change, such as it can effect to our mood, especially me when the weather it's unstable, it can reduce my mood.

✓ I think there are some reasons for the effects of climate change, such as it can affect our mood, especially mine when the weather is unstable; it can reduce my mood.

The phrase 'effect from' should be 'effects of' because 'effect' is a noun and 'affect' is the verb needed here. Also, 'effect to our mood' is incorrect; it should be 'affect our mood'. 'Especially me' should be 'especially mine' to correctly refer to the speaker's mood. These corrections fix noun-verb confusion and pronoun usage.

× Sometimes I can feel happy and sometimes I I.

✓ Sometimes I can feel happy and sometimes I feel sad.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'I I'. It needs completion to convey the intended contrast. Adding 'feel sad' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× Absolutely yes, especially country which has MMM snow season because in my country, Indonesia, we don't.

✓ Absolutely yes, especially countries which have snow seasons because in my country, Indonesia, we don't.

The singular 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match the plural 'snow seasons'. Also, 'MMM' is unclear and removed. This correction fixes number agreement and clarity.

× I don't, I mean my country doesn't have umm snow and I want to feel umm about the snow and the fibes environment after the snow.

✓ I don't, I mean my country doesn't have snow and I want to experience the snow and the vibes of the environment after the snow.

The phrase 'feel umm about the snow and the fibes environment' is unclear and contains a typo 'fibes' which should be 'vibes'. Also, 'feel about' is better expressed as 'experience'. This correction improves word choice and clarity.