Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it ends abruptly and lacks a complete final sentence. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Since I live in the Torai region of Nepal, the weather is generally quite hot throughout the year. Summers are especially warm and humid, while winters are mild and pleasant. Because of this hot climate, people often prefer to stay indoors during the hottest parts of the day.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat informal and slightly unclear in the beginning. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to organise your ideas. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Example: I mostly prefer hot weather, especially summers, because I enjoy wearing light clothing. Additionally, I like going to swimming pools and drinking cold beverages during this season.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats the preference unnecessarily and contains a small hesitation ('I yes'). Try to avoid repetition and hesitations. Also, provide more specific reasons to support your preference and use linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer dry weather because I dislike the stickiness and inconvenience caused by rain. Although many people enjoy wet weather, I find dry days more comfortable and easier to plan outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by combining sentences more smoothly using linking words and avoiding slight redundancy.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily because I like to know what the weather will be like the next day. Moreover, before going on trips or vacations, I always check the forecast to prepare accordingly.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but contains some grammatical errors and could be clearer. Use linking words to separate ideas and check sentence structure for accuracy.

Example: We can see many effects of climate change, such as the monsoon season in Nepal shifting to October and November, whereas it usually started in July and August. Additionally, winters have become shorter; they used to last about three months.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by combining sentences and using linking words to make it more fluent and natural.

Example: Yes, since Nepal is a subtropical country, snowfall only occurs in mountainous areas. Therefore, I would really like to visit a place with snowfall to experience it and play in the snow.

× This hot climate influences the lifestyle here, as people often prefer.

✓ This hot climate influences the lifestyle here, as people often prefer it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'prefer'. Adding 'it' clarifies what people prefer, making the sentence grammatically complete.

× It depends how hot or cold it is for, but I mostly prefer summers because I like wearing light clothing and enjoying the summers going to swimming pools and just having cold drinks.

✓ It depends on how hot or cold it is, but I mostly prefer summers because I like wearing light clothing and enjoying the summers by going to swimming pools and just having cold drinks.

The phrase 'depends how' should be 'depends on how' to correctly use the preposition. Also, 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Additionally, 'enjoying the summers going to swimming pools' is unclear; adding 'by' clarifies the activity.

× I yes, I prefer dry weather.

✓ Yes, I prefer dry weather.

The phrase 'I yes, I' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is simply 'Yes, I prefer dry weather.' to affirm the statement clearly.

× And now even before going to some trips or vacation, I like to check the weather beforehand so I know exactly what to expect during the vacation.

✓ And now even before going on some trips or vacations, I like to check the weather beforehand so I know exactly what to expect during the vacation.

The correct preposition with 'going' when referring to trips or vacations is 'on', not 'to'. Also, 'vacation' should be pluralized to 'vacations' to match 'trips' or be consistent.

× We can see many effects of climate change like the monsoon in Nepal has shifted to October, November when usually monsoon started in July and August and winter is has also become shorter.

✓ We can see many effects of climate change, like the monsoon in Nepal shifting to October and November, whereas it usually started in July and August, and winter has also become shorter.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. Using 'shifting' and 'whereas' improves clarity and sentence structure. Also, 'is has' is incorrect; 'has' alone is correct.