Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Например, использовать связующие слова для плавного перехода между предложениями и избегать повторов.

Example: The weather in Astana is quite extreme; in winter, temperatures can drop to -40°C with heavy snowfall, while summers are warm, often exceeding 20°C. Additionally, the city experiences strong winds due to its continental climate.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечетко выражена мысль. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более ясные формулировки.

Example: I prefer hot weather because winters in Astana are very cold and harsh, which I find uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Необходимо подготовиться к пониманию базовой лексики, чтобы отвечать на вопросы без затруднений. Рекомендуется учить основные погодные термины.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities and I don't have to worry about rain.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется практиковать более плавную речь и правильное использование времен.

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast; instead, I look outside, and if it is raining, I take an umbrella with me.

Suggestion: Нужно подготовить хотя бы простые ответы на сложные вопросы, чтобы показать способность рассуждать. Можно использовать базовые фразы для выражения мнения.

Example: I think climate change causes more extreme weather, like hotter summers and colder winters, which affects people's lives.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и повторов. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения для описания предпочтений.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, Almaty has a warm and hot climate, which allows for many outdoor activities.

× In winter the temperature can be -40° and there a lot of snow.

✓ In winter the temperature can be -40° and there is a lot of snow.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'there' to correctly form the existential clause 'there is a lot of snow'. This is a common structure to indicate the existence of something. Without 'is', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer hot weather because there was in Astana is very cold in the winter.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it is very cold in Astana in the winter.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'is' and has awkward word order. The correct form uses present tense 'is' to describe a general fact and proper sentence structure.

× Uh, sorry, what means the words dry and wet?

✓ Uh, sorry, what do the words dry and wet mean?

The question is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' needed for forming questions in the present simple tense. Also, the word order should be 'do the words ... mean' rather than 'what means the words'.

× I usually, uh, don't, uh, checking the words of forecast because for my convenience, I just look out the window and if outside, uh, rainy, then I take with, uh, with me umbrella.

✓ I usually don't check the weather forecast because for my convenience, I just look out the window and if it is rainy outside, then I take an umbrella with me.

The verb 'checking' is incorrectly used after 'don't'; the base form 'check' should be used after 'don't'. Also, 'words of forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'weather forecast'. The phrase 'if outside, rainy' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if it is rainy outside'. The phrase 'take with me umbrella' is incorrect; it should be 'take an umbrella with me'.

× It's so difficult question, I don't know.

✓ It's a difficult question; I don't know.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'difficult question'. Also, the phrase 'so difficult question' is unnatural; 'a difficult question' is correct. The two clauses should be separated properly, for example with a semicolon or period.