Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and use simpler, clearer sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is natural and coherent.

Example: The weather where I live is usually moderate. It rains sometimes because of the local landscape, which affects the climate.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to explain your reasons more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it is better for my skin. Also, when it's cold, my body stays balanced and comfortable, which helps me feel positive.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a clear opinion and supporting it with specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and confusing phrases.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for me. Wet weather can be inconvenient and sometimes causes problems like slippery roads.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, explain how often you check the forecast and why.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home. Sometimes, I also observe the sky to see if it looks cloudy or clear.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

Example: Climate change has many effects, such as the depletion of the ozone layer. This is caused by deforestation, especially from illegal mining activities in forest reserves, which damages the environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Try to directly answer the question and provide reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring new places and having adventures in different weather conditions.

× Well, the weather condition at where I live is moderate to my thinking because it rains at times due to the landscape of my community.

✓ Well, the weather condition where I live is moderate in my opinion because it rains at times due to the landscape of my community.

The phrase 'at where I live' is incorrect; the preposition 'at' should be omitted. Also, 'to my thinking' is not a common expression; 'in my opinion' is more appropriate here.

× Well, I prefer cold weather because the cold weather is conducive for my skin. I am all positive and thus generates more heat. So having a cool environment keeps my body temperature very balanced.

✓ Well, I prefer cold weather because cold weather is conducive for my skin. I am all positive and thus generate more heat. So having a cool environment keeps my body temperature very balanced.

The pronoun 'I' is singular and should be followed by the verb 'generate' without 's'. The phrase 'I am all positive' is unclear but grammatically 'I generate' is correct instead of 'generates'.

× Well, in my opinion, I think I like. And dry weather because of the heat of what weather might generate because of the heat, a white weather.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I like dry weather because of the heat that weather might generate.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Removing unnecessary words and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I really check the weather forecasts. Well, I really checked the weather forecast. I mostly tend to adapt to the old style of checking where I check the atmosphere, the cloudiness of the atmosphere.

✓ Well, I really check the weather forecasts. I mostly tend to adapt to the old style of checking where I observe the atmosphere, the cloudiness of the atmosphere.

The sentence switches unnecessarily between present and past tense. Since the question is about habit, present tense 'check' is appropriate. Also, 'check the atmosphere' is better expressed as 'observe the atmosphere'.

× Well, the a lot of effects of climate change nowadays, particularly the depletion of the ozone layer. This is as a result of deforestation that goes on in our forest reserves, for instance, due to the activities of illegal mining. It has led to the deforestation that led to the.

✓ Well, there are a lot of effects of climate change nowadays, particularly the depletion of the ozone layer. This is a result of deforestation that goes on in our forest reserves, for instance, due to the activities of illegal mining.

The original sentences are incomplete and have redundancy. Adding 'there are' corrects the sentence structure, and removing the incomplete last sentence improves clarity.

× Yes, I would like to visit other tourists, other tour sites. I enjoy strolling for adventure.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other tourist sites. I enjoy strolling for adventure.

The phrase 'visit other tourists' is incorrect; it should be 'visit other tourist sites' to refer to places. This corrects the pronoun usage and meaning.