Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks grammatical accuracy and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the weather conditions.

Example: I live in London, where the weather is often foggy and quite humid. During winter, it tends to be dark and cold, while summers are mild with moderate temperatures.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your preference. Also, avoid repeating the word 'prefer' too closely.

Example: I generally enjoy hot weather, but I especially like mild summers like those in London, where temperatures can reach up to 30 degrees Celsius, which feels pleasantly warm without being too hot.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure your sentences are complete.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable, especially when I have plans to dress up nicely. Wet weather can damage clothes and make it difficult to enjoy outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify the frequency of checking the forecast.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast daily to plan my activities accordingly. Since the weather changes frequently, it helps me decide whether to carry an umbrella or dress appropriately.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and provide specific examples. Use linking words to structure your response logically.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused noticeable effects, especially in Europe. Winters have become milder, while summers are often hotter than before, leading to extreme weather conditions.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to complete your thoughts. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience how climate change affects weather conditions around the world. For instance, visiting parts of Africa would show me how rising temperatures impact local environments.

× Is dark in winter.

✓ It is dark in winter.

The sentence lacks a subject. In English, sentences require a subject; here, 'It' is the appropriate subject for weather or time-related statements.

× In summer is not really hot, so the normal temperature.

✓ In summer, it is not really hot, so the temperature is normal.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and the verb 'is' in the second clause. Also, 'the normal temperature' is incomplete; it needs a verb to form a complete sentence.

× I do prefer hot weather, however, I prefer a mild summer, which is the one we have in London where the temperatures rise up to 30°, so that is the kind of hot.

✓ I do prefer hot weather; however, I prefer a mild summer, which is what we have in London where the temperatures rise up to 30°, so that is the kind of hot I like.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a semicolon to properly connect independent clauses. Also, 'which is the one' is better expressed as 'which is what' for clarity.

× If you have any plans and you have to dress up properly with a nice dress and you have made your dress.

✓ If you have any plans and you have to dress up properly in a nice dress that you have made.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'in' is used to describe wearing clothes. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer a dry weather because it will not damage.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it will not cause damage.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'damage' needs a verb like 'cause' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast so I know how to rest properly according to the weather.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast so I know how to dress properly according to the weather.

The word 'rest' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'dress' to match the intended meaning of preparing clothing according to weather.

× And also as the weather is so volatile changing so it's better to know if I need to pack an umbrella in advance if I have a rainy day.

✓ Also, as the weather is so volatile and changing, it's better to know in advance if I need to pack an umbrella for a rainy day.

The sentence needed conjunction 'and' between 'volatile' and 'changing'. 'In advance' should be placed before 'know' or 'pack'. Also, 'if I have a rainy day' is better expressed as 'for a rainy day'.

× There are many facts of the in of the climate change in the recent years, I would say especially in Europe, the coldest months and for summer there are hotter months.

✓ There are many effects of climate change in recent years; I would say especially in Europe, the coldest months are colder and the summer months are hotter.

'Facts of the in of the climate change' is incorrect; it should be 'effects of climate change'. Also, the sentence structure was unclear and needed clarification.

× So yes, I you can tell that.

✓ So yes, you can tell that.

The phrase 'I you' is incorrect; it should be just 'you' to make sense.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities, uh, so you can experience how the climb climate change has affect the weather conditions in each country.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities so I can experience how climate change has affected the weather conditions in each country.

'Climb' is a typo for 'climate'. 'Has affect' should be 'has affected' (past participle). Also, 'you' should be 'I' to match the subject.

× For example, in Africa. Uh, you will be interesting to know if for the.

✓ For example, in Africa, you will find it interesting to know about the changes.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. It needs to be restructured to form a complete and coherent sentence.