Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、繰り返しや言い間違いがあり、文の構造が少し不明瞭です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の誤りを減らすことが重要です。

Example: The weather where I live varies between rainy and sunny days. When it's sunny, I feel calm and comfortable, but rainy days make me feel a bit sad.

Suggestion: 回答は内容が明確ですが、「putting adult clothes」という表現が不自然です。より適切な語彙を使い、理由を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

Example: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes that make me feel comfortable and relaxed. On the other hand, hot sunny days often make me feel overwhelmed and uncomfortable.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りと語彙の選択に注意が必要です。より自然な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

Example: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes me uncomfortable and causes my lips to dry out. Wet weather feels more calming and comfortable to me.

Suggestion: 回答が不明瞭で、話が逸れています。質問に直接答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。

Example: To be honest, I rarely check the weather forecast because I don't watch TV often. However, I prefer sunny weather.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りと語彙の使い方に注意が必要です。より具体的な影響を挙げ、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Example: Climate change has definitely affected our daily lives in recent years. For example, extreme weather events have become more common, so I believe we need to take actions like reducing energy consumption.

Suggestion: 回答が不自然で言い淀みが多いです。簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、経験や希望をはっきり述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have never experienced snow, so I want to visit a place where it snows.

× When I when it is sunny, I feel so calm and comfortable.

✓ When it is sunny, I feel so calm and comfortable.

The phrase 'When I when it is sunny' contains a repetition and incorrect use of 'when'. Removing the extra 'when I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Well I definitely enjoy cold days because by putting adult clothes I can feel more comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Well I definitely enjoy cold days because by wearing adult clothes I can feel more comfortable and relaxed.

The phrase 'by putting adult clothes' is incorrect; the correct preposition and verb combination is 'by wearing adult clothes' to indicate the action of having clothes on.

× However, if it's a sunny day which is hot, I always feel overwhelmed and uncomfortable.

✓ However, if it's a sunny day which is hot, I always feel overwhelmed and uncomfortable.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Well for me I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable and my lip is dry so when it comes to wet weather it feel more calmed and comfortable.

✓ Well for me I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable and my lips are dry so when it comes to wet weather it feels more calm and comfortable.

The word 'lip' should be plural 'lips' to match the usual expression. Also, 'it feel' should be 'it feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Calmed' is incorrect here; the adjective 'calm' should be used.

× I'm to be honest, I don't really check the weather because I don't really watch TV such as UMM without focus, so I don't have the opportunity to check the weather, but I prefer sunny.

✓ To be honest, I don't really check the weather because I don't really watch TV, such as UMM, without focus, so I don't have the opportunity to check the weather, but I prefer sunny days.

The phrase 'I'm to be honest' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be honest'. Also, adding commas improves clarity. 'I prefer sunny' is incomplete; 'sunny days' is more appropriate.

× Well, that's interesting topics.

✓ Well, that's an interesting topic.

The phrase 'that's interesting topics' mixes singular 'that is' with plural 'topics'. It should be singular 'an interesting topic' to agree with 'that is'.

× In my opinion, changing climate patterns has had definitely impact on our daily lives over the year, so I think we need to take action such as reducing energy.

✓ In my opinion, changing climate patterns have definitely had an impact on our daily lives over the years, so I think we need to take action such as reducing energy use.

The subject 'changing climate patterns' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Also, 'definitely impact' needs an article 'an impact'. 'Over the year' should be plural 'over the years'. Added 'use' after 'reducing energy' for clarity.

× Yes, differently, but to be honest, I haven't really been to the country that is different weather from my from I live, but uh, to actually, I haven't experienced, umm, snow, so I want to.

✓ Yes, definitely, but to be honest, I haven't really been to a country that has different weather from where I live, but actually, I haven't experienced snow, so I want to.

'Differently' is incorrect here; 'definitely' fits better. 'The country that is different weather from my from I live' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'a country that has different weather from where I live'. Removed redundant words for clarity.