Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence describing the weather (e.g. "It's quite cold and windy"). Use correct grammar for adjectives (cold, windy) and plural/singular forms. Remove filler words (uh, umm) and avoid repeated or vague phrases. Add one specific detail (e.g. temperature range, typical clothing) using a linking word such as "for example" or "so".

Example: It's usually cold and quite windy where I live. For example, temperatures often fall to around 5–10°C in the mornings, so people wear heavy coats and trousers to stay warm.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar ("people" not "peoples", "fresh air"). Avoid irrelevant or vague statements. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer cold weather because the air is fresher and the environment looks cleaner. For example, people often sit outside together wrapped in warm clothes and enjoy walking in the crisp air.

Suggestion: Answer directly ("I prefer dry weather") and give specific, coherent reasons. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary ("comfortable", "clothes"). Avoid confusing or contradictory examples ("dancing in the sea" is unclear). Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" and limit to two supporting details.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for daily activities. For example, driving is easier without rain, and people can walk to shops or exercise outside without worrying about muddy clothes.

Suggestion: Use present simple for habits ("I check the weather regularly"). State frequency and reason clearly (e.g. "every morning to plan my day"). Avoid excessive fillers and clarify timing ("in winter"). Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast regularly, usually every morning. I do this especially in winter because rain can start suddenly, so I need to know if I should bring an umbrella or wear warmer clothes.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about the effects ("I think climate change has caused more extreme weather"). Give two specific examples (hotter summers, colder winters, health or economic impacts) and use linking words like "for example" or "as a result". Use correct grammar ("recent years", "people are uncomfortable").

Example: I think climate change has led to more extreme weather in recent years. For example, summers are often much hotter and winters can be harsher, which affects people's health and makes farming and daily life more difficult.

Suggestion: Answer clearly ("Yes, I would like to visit cities with milder climates") and give a concise reason. Use correct adjectives and comparative forms ("milder", "more moderate"). Avoid repetition and filler words. Provide a specific example of a climate you would like to experience and why.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with milder climates because my hometown has very hot summers and very cold winters. For example, I would like to spend a winter in a coastal city with moderate temperatures and pleasant, cool days.

× The weather condition where I live is slightly wind colded and people are wearing uh, many clothes with which make warm them and uh, for example, umm people's are wear like uh, and trouser which give them warmness and help to maintain their body temperature.

✓ The weather where I live is slightly windy and cold, and people are wearing many clothes that keep them warm. For example, people wear jackets and trousers that give them warmth and help maintain their body temperature.

The original sentence uses incorrect adjective forms (wind colded) and awkward phrasing. 'Windy' is the correct adjective, not 'wind colded'. 'Many clothes with which make warm them' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'clothes that keep them warm.' 'People's are wear' is incorrect; use 'people wear'. 'Warmness' is awkward; use 'warmth'. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms, simple relative clauses, and natural noun choices like 'warmth' and 'jacket(s)'.

× I prefer cold weather because our environment is very neat and clean and with a fresh air and many peoples are wearing a cloth and sit together and spend time with.

✓ I prefer cold weather because our environment is very neat and clean with fresh air, and many people are wearing warm clothes, sitting together and spending time together.

The sentence uses incorrect plurals: 'peoples' should be 'people' and 'a cloth' should be 'clothes' or 'a cloth' is wrong in context. 'With a fresh air' should be 'with fresh air' (no article). Also verb forms should be parallel: 'sitting' and 'spending'. Suggestions: use 'people' for plural, 'clothes' for garments, drop unnecessary articles, and maintain parallel verb forms.

× I prepare dry weather because people are feeling comfortable in driving and some people go everywhere like shopping, walking, dancing in the sea which helps to comfortable and not and uh not worry about the weight or colothes etc.

✓ I prefer dry weather because people feel comfortable driving, and some people can go out for shopping, walking, or swimming, which helps them feel comfortable and not worry about wet clothes or getting wet.

The original uses 'I prepare' instead of 'I prefer' (wrong verb). 'People are feeling comfortable in driving' is awkward; use 'people feel comfortable driving.' 'Dancing in the sea' is incorrect; likely 'swimming' or 'walking on the beach'. 'Which helps to comfortable' is wrong; use 'helps them feel comfortable.' 'Not worry about the weight or colothes' is unclear; likely 'not worry about wet clothes.' Suggestions: use correct verbs ('prefer'), modal or ability verbs appropriately ('can go out'), and choose accurate verbs for activities ('swimming').

× Yes, I had a habit to checking weather forecast because I like, uh, I like dry season and uh, worry about how forecast about, uh, rainy because, uh, I mainly forecast in uh, winter season because I in winter rain is happened in any anytime, So I regularly check the weather condition.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast because I like the dry season and worry about rain. I mainly check the forecast in winter because rain can happen at any time in winter, so I regularly check the weather conditions.

Errors: 'had a habit to checking' should be 'have a habit of checking' (correct verb + gerund pattern). 'How forecast about, uh, rainy' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'worry about rain.' 'I mainly forecast' is wrong; the speaker 'checks' the forecast. 'Rain is happened' is incorrect passive; use 'rain can happen.' Suggestions: use 'have a habit of' + gerund, use active verbs like 'check the forecast', and use 'can happen' for possibility.

× I think the effect of climate change in recent year are more high because, uh, in recent year, the, in summer season there are too much, uh, hot and in the winter season there are too much cold, which affects the human being and, uh, and the people and the people are not comfortable in that seasons.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years are greater because in recent years the summers have been very hot and the winters very cold, which affects people and makes them uncomfortable in those seasons.

Errors: 'effect' should be plural 'effects' to match 'are'; 'recent year' should be 'recent years'; 'are more high' is incorrect comparative ('are higher' or 'are greater'); 'there are too much hot' should be 'the summers have been very hot'; 'human being and, uh, and the people' is redundant. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct comparative forms ('higher'/'greater'), pluralize when needed, and avoid redundancy.

× Yeah, I like to visit other cities which have different climate from where I can live, uh, because in where I live, there are too much hot in summer season and cold in winters.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because where I live it is very hot in summer and cold in winter.

Problems: 'which have different climate from where I can live' is ungrammatical and misuses 'which' and 'can'; use 'that have different climates from where I live.' 'Too much hot' should be 'very hot' and 'winters' should be singular 'winter' when speaking generally. Suggestions: use correct relative pronouns ('that'), pluralize 'climates' if referring to multiple cities, and use standard adverbs ('very hot').

× So I would like to visit that place where the temperature is normal, like, uh, in winter there are moderate, uh, climates. So I prefer to live.

✓ So I would like to visit places where the temperature is moderate, for example where winters are mild. I would prefer to live there.

The original has awkward structure: 'in winter there are moderate climates' is incorrect. Use 'places where the temperature is moderate' and 'winters are mild.' 'So I prefer to live' needs an object 'there.' Suggestions: restructure sentences for clarity, use 'moderate' with 'temperature' and 'mild' for winters, and include clear objects for verbs like 'live.'