Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答が不自然で文法誤りや冗長な表現があります。まず冒頭で直接的な主題文（topic sentence）を述べ、季節ごとの具体的な特徴を簡潔に列挙してください。つなぎ言葉（for example, in spring, in summer）を用いて文の流れを良くし、不要な音声（uh, umm）を減らしましょう。また文法（'climate are temporary temperate'など）を修正して正しい表現にすること。最大5文に収め、各季節ごとに一文ずつ簡潔に説明する練習をしてください。

Example: I live in Japan, which has a temperate climate with four distinct seasons. In spring, the weather is mild and cherry blossoms bloom. Summer is hot and humid, often with heavy rain in the rainy season. Autumn is cool with clear skies, and winter is generally cold and dry.

Suggestion: 理由は明確ですが文法と語順の誤りが目立ちます（'climb mountain'→'climb mountains'、'necessary to bring'の不自然さ）。第一文で好みをはっきり述べ、その後で具体的な理由と具体例（安全や装備の問題）を短く補足しましょう。接続詞（because, so）を使って論理を明確にし、不要な繰り返しを避けてください。

Example: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy mountain climbing. In summer I can climb comfortably, but in winter I need heavy gear and it can be dangerous due to snow.

Suggestion: 答えは直接的で分かりやすいですが、'uh'などの填補語を減らし、理由をもう少し具体的に述べるとより良くなります。例えば活動や健康面での影響（服の不快感、体調不良、通学・通勤の困難など）を一つ追加すると説得力が増します。文は最大2～3文にまとめてください。

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet clothes are uncomfortable and can make me feel cold. Also, rainy weather often makes commuting and outdoor activities difficult.

Suggestion: 質問を聞き返すだけで回答していません。まずは直接『Yes』か『No』で答え、その後で頻度や方法（スマホアプリ、テレビなど）と時間帯（朝、前日に）を付け加えましょう。具体例を入れると評価が上がります。回答は2〜3文で簡潔に。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before going out. I also check the forecast the night before if I plan to travel.

Suggestion: 内容が不完全で意味が不明瞭です（'album change'は誤り）。まず主題文で影響を一つか二つ明確に述べ、理由や具体例（異常気象、海面上昇、農作物への影響など）を続けてください。接続語（for example, therefore）を使い、文を完結させること。語彙は簡潔で正確な単語を選び、最大3文程度に収めましょう。

Example: I think climate change has caused higher average temperatures and more extreme weather events. For example, there have been more heatwaves and heavier storms, which can damage crops and infrastructure.

Suggestion: 興味は示されていますが、繰り返しや填補語（uh, umm）が多く不自然です。まず簡潔に意欲を述べ（Yes, I would.）、次に理由（see different lifestyles, try local food, experience activities）と具体例（visited Yakushima、what you experienced there）を一つ述べて締めましょう。語順と過去形の使い方を整え、例を完結させてください。

Example: Yes, I would. I enjoy visiting cities with different climates because I can experience different lifestyles and activities. For example, I visited Yakushima last year and enjoyed its cool, lush forests and unique local food.

× In Japan, the weather is climate are temporary temperate climate.

✓ In Japan, the climate is a temperate one.

The original mixes nouns and adjectives incorrectly and has extra words. Use 'climate' as the subject and 'temperate' as an adjective; include the article 'a' and the noun 'one' to make the phrase natural. Suggestion: simplify to 'The climate in Japan is temperate.'

× Uh, there are Four Seasons.

✓ There are four seasons.

Capitalization error and unnecessary emphasis. 'Seasons' is plural which is correct; just use lowercase 'four'. Suggestion: write 'There are four seasons.'

× In spring, uh, the weather is uh, in winter the weather is cold and dry, and in summer, uh, the weather is, is hot.

✓ In spring the weather is mild; in winter it is cold and dry; and in summer it is hot.

Sentence lacks parallel structure and has disfluencies. Use consistent present simple tense and parallel clauses: 'In spring..., in winter..., and in summer...'. Remove fillers and repeated words.

× I prefer hot weather because my hobby is to climb mountain.

✓ I prefer hot weather because my hobby is climbing mountains.

After 'hobby is' use the gerund form 'climbing' rather than infinitive. Also pluralize 'mountains' or say 'to climb mountains'. Suggestion: 'My hobby is climbing mountains.'

× I like to climb mountain in summer because in winter it is necessary to bring.

✓ I like to climb mountains in summer because in winter you need to bring extra gear.

Missing plural for 'mountains' and incomplete clause 'necessary to bring'. Add subject 'you' and object 'extra gear' to complete meaning. Use 'in summer' and correct verb phrase 'need to bring'.

× Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast?

✓ I am in the habit of checking the weather forecast.

Student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Change to a declarative present tense response 'I am in the habit of...' or 'Yes, I usually check the weather forecast.'

× My album change is that the temperature is higher than old days because global warming and.

✓ My observation is that temperatures are higher than in the past because of global warming.

The phrase 'My album change' is incorrect; likely meant 'My observation' or 'My experience'. Use plural 'temperatures' and phrase 'higher than in the past'. Include 'because of' before 'global warming' and remove trailing 'and'.

× One point is that not only air temperature, but also.

✓ One point is that not only air temperature has changed, but other factors have too.

Incomplete sentence and missing verb. 'Not only... but also' construction requires both parts to be parallel and complete. Provide a parallel second clause such as 'other factors have too.'

× Yes, I would, I, I like visiting other cities and umm and I, I like to uh, see other lifestyles because of climate.

✓ Yes, I would. I like visiting other cities and seeing different lifestyles because of the climate.

Remove disfluencies and repetitions. Use parallel gerund forms 'visiting' and 'seeing'. Add article 'the' before 'climate' to specify reason.

× Uh, for example, uh, I visited Yakshima last.

✓ For example, I visited Yakushima recently.

'Last' is incomplete; use 'last year/month' or use 'recently'. Also correct spelling to 'Yakushima'. Use simple past 'visited' which is appropriate, and remove fillers.