Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the typical weather, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, "in summer" / "in winter") to make it coherent.

Example: The weather where I live is hot and mild in summer and cold and rainy in winter. In summer we can enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and hiking, but in winter people usually stay indoors because of the rain and low temperatures.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of preference, then provide two specific reasons linked logically. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct grammar (use consistent pronouns and verb forms). Keep it to three sentences maximum.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it helps me feel more energetic and active. For example, I can go jogging or play football outdoors. In contrast, cold weather often makes me feel less motivated to go outside.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with a concise reason and a brief example. Remove fillers like "uh" and fix sentence structure. Use linking phrase "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it lets me go out without worrying about rain. For instance, I can go cycling or meet friends without carrying an umbrella.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific routine details. Use correct grammar and shorter sentences: mention frequency (always, usually) and when (morning). Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Use linking words like "so" to show purpose.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home. I do this to decide whether to wear warmer clothes or take an umbrella, so I'm prepared for rain or cold.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion followed by two specific effects of climate change using correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and fillers. Use linking words like "because" and "as a result" and provide a concrete example (e.g., heatwaves, pollution, extreme weather).

Example: I think climate change has made temperatures higher and caused more extreme weather. For example, we now experience more heatwaves and increased air pollution, which makes it harder to breathe and harms health.

Suggestion: Start with a clear yes/no and give specific reasons and an example of what you want to try. Correct grammar (e.g., "most of the year it's very hot") and avoid trailing off. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit colder countries because my country is hot for most of the year. I want to experience snow and try winter activities like skiing or building snowmen.

× When it comes to the climate in my area, it's hot and mild in summer and the cold in and rainy in winter days.

✓ When it comes to the climate in my area, it's hot and mild in summer and cold and rainy in winter.

Incorrect present-tense phrasing and extra words made the sentence awkward. Remove the unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'cold', delete 'in' before 'winter days', and move adjectives into parallel order. Suggestion: keep consistent simple present descriptions and use parallel adjective structure (cold and rainy in winter).

× So in summer we can do outdoor activities and then winter you can just stay at home and.

✓ So in summer we can do outdoor activities, but in winter you usually stay at home.

Sentence fragment and poor conjunction use cause structure errors. Replace the trailing 'and' with a contrasting conjunction ('but') and complete the verb phrase ('usually stay at home') to form a full sentence. Maintain simple present tense for habitual actions.

× It allows me to stay more active and energetic.

✓ It allows me to stay more active and energetic.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no change. It correctly uses simple present to state a general truth.

× And you can do a lot of activities.

✓ You can do many activities.

Use of 'a lot of' is informal but acceptable; however 'many' is more concise and fits written standard. Also remove initial coordinating conjunction 'And' to avoid sentence fragments.

× But in cold weather you'll become more lazy and do you do a few things like in summer you can do a lot of things and you you become more productive.

✓ But in cold weather you'll become lazier and do fewer things; in summer you can do more and you become more productive.

Multiple issues: comparative adjective should be 'lazier' (third-person singular comparative form). 'Do fewer things' uses correct quantifier for countable activities. Remove repeated words and split into two clauses for clarity. Maintain future-in-present meaning with 'you'll' or general present 'you become' consistently.

× Personally, I prefer dry weather, uh, where you can go to anywhere you want and uh, you don't worry about the rain in contrast with weather can, can make you stay at home in rainy days.

✓ Personally, I prefer dry weather, where you can go anywhere you want and you don't have to worry about the rain, whereas wet weather can make you stay at home on rainy days.

Incorrect prepositions: 'go to anywhere' should be 'go anywhere'. 'Don't worry about the rain' better as 'don't have to worry about the rain'. Use 'whereas' to contrast and 'on rainy days' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also fix word order and repetition.

× Yes I'm that person I always checking the weather forecast before I go outside to make sure if I have to to wear a heavier clothes and if a trainee so I I take my umbrella with me and umm usually I check the weather in the morning before I step out of my house.

✓ Yes, I'm the kind of person who always checks the weather forecast before I go outside to make sure if I have to wear heavier clothes or take an umbrella; usually I check the weather in the morning before I leave the house.

Run-on sentence and wrong verb forms: use 'checks' for third-person singular present in relative clause 'who always checks'. 'Checking' should be 'checks'. Remove duplicated words and correct 'a heavier clothes' to 'heavier clothes' (no article). 'Take an umbrella' is clearer than 'if a trainee'. Use 'leave the house' instead of 'step out of my house' for natural phrasing.

× Nowadays, I think the weather is become more hotter because of the climate as the fields in the course affect the air.

✓ Nowadays, I think the weather has become hotter because of climate change and pollution affecting the air.

Incorrect tense and verb form: 'is become' is wrong; use present perfect 'has become' to describe change over time. 'More hotter' is redundant; use 'hotter'. The phrase 'as the fields in the course affect the air' is unclear; replace with 'because of climate change and pollution affecting the air' for clarity and correctness.

× So there's a lot of air pollution that don't allow you to breathe, uh, fresh.

✓ So there's a lot of air pollution that doesn't allow you to breathe fresh air.

Subject-verb agreement and word order: 'pollution' is singular so use 'doesn't' not 'don't'. 'Breathe, fresh' is incorrect order; use 'breathe fresh air'. Keep simple present tense for general truths.

× Yes, of course I would try to visit cold countries because the weather in my country is almost the year is very hot and uh, I can try different things and activities like snowing and.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to visit cold countries because the weather in my country is hot almost all year, and I could try different activities such as experiencing snow.

Incorrect modal and awkward tense: use 'would like to' to express desire. 'Is almost the year is very hot' is ungrammatical; use 'hot almost all year'. 'Try different things and activities like snowing' is awkward—use 'try different activities such as experiencing snow.' Maintain conditional or hypothetical mood with 'would' and 'could' consistently.