Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence describing current weather, avoid unrelated phrases (thanking examiner). Reduce grammar errors and use correct nouns (poetic). Add one or two specific details about why you like it. Keep answers under five sentences.

Example: The weather where I live is usually warm and humid, especially during the rainy season. I enjoy the rainy season because the air feels fresh and the streets become quieter, which makes the city feel more peaceful and romantic.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference with one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'there are various diseases in hot weather' → 'hot weather causes more health problems') and avoid unclear phrases like 'not intolerable and the temperature.' Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' correctly.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it usually reduces the spread of insects and heat-related illnesses. Also, I find it more comfortable to wear layers in cold weather, whereas hot weather makes me feel tired and dehydrated.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give specific, relevant reasons. Remove fillers like 'uh' and 'yeah'. Explain why wet weather is enjoyable (e.g., atmosphere, activities) and clarify cultural details briefly if mentioned (e.g., cooking kichuri) with linking words like 'for example' or 'so'.

Example: I usually prefer wet weather because it creates a calm, romantic atmosphere. For example, rainy days are perfect for cooking comfort foods like kichuri and spending time with family indoors.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear routine: how often and when. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I have a habit of checking' and avoid redundancy). Use linking words to structure: first say frequency, then give examples of occasions when you check it.

Example: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, usually every morning. I check it especially before going out or when I plan trips, such as visiting Cox's Bazar, and also if extreme temperatures are expected.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific, accurate effects of climate change. Correct grammar (e.g., 'there have been huge changes in our climate recently') and use precise vocabulary ('global warming', 'sea-level rise', 'extreme weather'). Use linking words to list effects.

Example: There have been major changes in our climate recently, mainly global warming and more extreme weather. For example, rising temperatures cause stronger storms and sea-level rise, which lead to flooding and damage to ecosystems.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific destinations and reasons. Remove hesitations ('uh') and use correct phrasing ('I intend to visit' or 'I would like to visit'). Explain why those climates interest you (e.g., scenery, activities). Keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially in Europe and Kashmir. I want to experience snowy mountains and cooler summers because I enjoy hiking and seeing landscapes that are very different from my home.

× OK, thanks for giving me a chance about describing my favorite weather.

✓ OK, thanks for giving me a chance to describe my favorite kind of weather.

Use the infinitive 'to describe' after 'a chance' instead of 'about describing', and add 'kind of' or 'type of' to make 'weather' countable in this context. Also change 'favorite weather' to 'favorite kind of weather' for natural phrasing.

× I love to live in rainy season at it is so romantic and so poetry season in our country.

✓ I love living in the rainy season because it is so romantic and poetic in our country.

Use the present continuous/habitual 'love living' or 'love to live' with 'the rainy season' (requires article). 'At it is' is incorrect; use 'because' to join clauses. 'Poetry season' is ungrammatical—use adjective 'poetic'.

× Between cold and hot weather, I would prefer cold weather because there is very various disease in hot weather and it is not intolerable and the temperature.

✓ Between cold and hot weather, I would prefer cold weather because many different diseases occur in hot weather and the temperature can be intolerable.

'Very various disease' is incorrect; use 'many different diseases' or 'a lot of different diseases'. Also 'it is not intolerable and the temperature' is unclear; likely meant 'the temperature can be intolerable'. Ensure plural 'diseases' matches meaning.

× Usually I prefer wet weather, uh, because yeah, the wet weather is uh, a bit romantic and a bit poetic environment.

✓ Usually I prefer wet weather because it creates a somewhat romantic and poetic atmosphere.

Avoid repeating 'wet weather is... environment' which is awkward. Use 'creates a ... atmosphere' and replace 'a bit' with 'somewhat' for smoother phrasing.

× And in wet weather we can, uh, cook kichuri and like that several dishes.

✓ In wet weather we can cook kichuri and other similar dishes.

'Like that several dishes' is ungrammatical. Use 'other similar dishes' or 'other dishes like that' to convey the meaning clearly.

× Yes, I have a habit to checking the weather forecast especially.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, especially before I go out.

After 'habit' use the preposition 'of' + gerund ('checking'), not 'to checking'. Adding context 'before I go out' clarifies frequency.

× I do this in general when I have a plan to go outside or have a plan for making a visit in Cox's Bazar.

✓ I generally do this when I plan to go outside or when I plan to visit Cox's Bazar.

Use 'generally' instead of 'in general' placed before verb. Use simple present 'plan' for habitual actions; 'making a visit in' should be 'visit Cox's Bazar' or 'make a visit to Cox's Bazar'.

× And when there is so much cold or so much hot then I usually check the the weather forecast.

✓ And when it is very cold or very hot, I usually check the weather forecast.

Use 'it is very cold/hot' rather than 'there is so much cold/hot'. Remove duplicate 'the'. Use commas for clarity.

× Yes, there are a huge change in our climate recent years and I think it's environmental degradation.

✓ Yes, there have been huge changes in our climate in recent years, and I think it's environmental degradation.

Use present perfect 'have been' for changes over recent years. 'A huge change' should be plural 'huge changes' to match 'have been'. Add 'in' before 'recent years'.

× It's that to our art is warming up.

✓ It means that our Earth is warming up.

The original is unintelligible. Likely meant 'our Earth is warming up'. Replace 'It's that to our art' with 'It means that our Earth' and use correct capitalization 'Earth' as a noun.

× Our Earth lost its temperature, our Earth lost its balanced.

✓ Our Earth is losing its balance and experiencing temperature changes.

Use continuous 'is losing' or 'has lost' rather than 'lost' which suggests a single past event. 'Lost its temperature' and 'lost its balanced' are unidiomatic; use 'experiencing temperature changes' and 'losing its balance'.

× Yes, I have an intention to visit the, uh, cities, which is uh, different in weather from my city.

✓ Yes, I intend to visit cities that have different weather from my city.

Use 'intend to' instead of 'have an intention to' for natural speech. Use 'cities that have different weather' rather than 'cities, which is different in weather' to match plural 'cities' with plural verb/structure.

× Especially I want to visit the European cities and and the Kashmir as it is totally different from my country.

✓ Especially, I want to visit European cities and Kashmir because they are totally different from my country.

Remove duplicate 'and'. Do not use 'the Kashmir' or 'the European cities' unless specific; 'Kashmir' is fine without 'the'. Use 'because they are' to explain reason and ensure plural agreement.