Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid plural errors and missing articles. For example, say where you live, mention the seasons you like, and give a specific reason (temperature, activities).

Example: I live in southern China, where the climate is mild. I especially enjoy spring and autumn because temperatures are pleasant and it’s perfect for taking long walks in parks.

Suggestion: Make a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two clear reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer cold weather because lower temperatures make me feel more energetic and comfortable. However, hot weather often makes people feel tired and irritable, especially on humid days.

Suggestion: First state your preference clearly, then explain specific reasons with coherent linking words. Correct vocabulary (dry, humid) and avoid hesitation sounds. Provide one concrete example about skin or health.

Example: I prefer humid weather because dry air makes my skin feel tight and uncomfortable. In humid conditions my skin stays hydrated, and I find it easier to breathe compared with very dry climates.

Suggestion: Give a clear answer about frequency and times, then give a concise reason. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Mention the method (app, TV) and a typical time you check (morning, before leaving).

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before I leave for work so I can dress appropriately. I also check it again in the evening if I have plans for the next day.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about observed effects, then list specific changes with examples and linking words. Use correct comparative language (warmer, colder) and mention concrete consequences (extreme weather, sea level rise).

Example: I think climate change has caused more extreme temperatures: summers are getting warmer and winters can be colder in some regions. As a result, we see more heatwaves, stronger storms, and unpredictable rainfall patterns.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give reasons with specific details about what you want to experience. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct vocabulary (seasons, climate). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience different seasons and landscapes. For example, I would love to see snowy mountains in a cold region and compare that to tropical beaches in the south.

× I live in southern China.

✓ I live in the south of China.

Use of article and regional expression: 'southern China' is understandable but more natural to say 'the south of China' or 'southern China' with 'the' omitted in some dialects. To be consistent and clear, use 'the south of China' when referring to the region. Improve by saying 'I live in the south of China.'

× I love spring and autumns.

✓ I love spring and autumn.

Pluralization of seasons: Seasons are usually used in singular when speaking generally. Use 'spring and autumn' (not 'autumns'). Say 'I love spring and autumn.'

× The temperatures in autumn and spring are pleasant and relaxing, the weather perfect for taking a walk.

✓ The temperatures in autumn and spring are pleasant and relaxing, and the weather is perfect for taking a walk.

Run-on and missing verb: Two independent clauses were joined with only a comma and the second clause lacks the verb 'is'. Add 'and' and 'is' to connect clauses correctly: 'and the weather is perfect...'.

× I prefer cold weather cause the temperature relatively low can make me feel exciting, but the the hot temperature can may may make people feel irritable.

✓ I prefer cold weather because relatively low temperatures can make me feel excited, but hot temperatures can make people feel irritable.

Several issues: 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'; subject-verb and article errors: 'the temperature relatively low' should be 'relatively low temperatures'; adjective choice: 'exciting' is wrong for feeling personally; use 'excited'. Remove duplicated modals 'can may may' and extra 'the'. Use 'can' once: 'can make people feel irritable.'

× It it it can, can it cannot.

✓ It can, or it cannot.

Redundancy and word order: Repeated words and incorrect structure. Use a clear contrastive conjunction and correct modal placement: 'It can, or it cannot.' Avoid repetitions.

× I guess I prefer uh, wait weather, because the drive environment make my skin dry and clicky.

✓ I guess I prefer dry weather, because the dry environment makes my skin dry and flaky.

Wrong word choices and prepositions: 'wait weather' should be 'dry weather'. 'drive environment' is incorrect; use 'dry environment'. Subject-verb agreement: 'environment makes' (adds 's'). Word choice: 'clicky' is wrong; likely 'flaky' or 'itchy' and avoid repeating 'dry'; suggest 'makes my skin dry and flaky.'

× On the contrary, with humid air, I don't have to worry about this problem.

✓ On the contrary, with humid air I don't have to worry about this problem.

Comma use and preposition: Remove unnecessary comma after 'air' for smoother flow. Sentence is otherwise acceptable.

× In addition, wait whether uh many people may make people health good.

✓ In addition, humid weather may be better for people's health.

Unclear phrasing and wrong words: 'wait whether' and 'make people health good' are incorrect. Rephrase to convey intended meaning: 'humid weather may be better for people's health.' Use 'people's health' possessive and correct adjective 'better.'

× Yes, I, uh, I have the habits of checking the weather forecast, uh, sun I I in my memory, I usually check this in the summary because, you know, the summary, uh, usually have the ring, so I need change check it I.

✓ Yes, I usually have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I usually check it in the morning because the forecast usually has the information I need, so I check it every day.

Multiple errors: 'habits' should be singular 'habit' when speaking of a regular activity. Grammar and coherence: 'sun I I in my memory' and 'summary' likely mean 'morning'. 'usually have the ring' unclear—replace with 'has the information I need'. Subject-verb agreement: 'forecast usually has' not 'have'. Provide clear sequence and frequency: 'I check it every day.'

× I think I think the effect is the temperature in the summary became more higher and On the contrary, in the winter the temperature become more lower.

✓ I think the effect is that summer temperatures have become higher, and on the contrary, winter temperatures have become lower.

Tense and comparative errors: Use present perfect 'have become' to describe changes in recent years. 'The summary' should be 'summer'. Remove double 'more' with comparative adjectives: use 'higher' not 'more higher' and 'lower' not 'more lower'. Ensure consistent plural 'temperatures.'

× Uh, yes, definitely if I have the opportunity, I, I will visit other cities.

✓ Yes, definitely. If I have the opportunity, I will visit other cities.

Minor fluency: Remove filler words and add punctuation. Tense and conditional are fine. Improve clarity by splitting into two sentences.

× Uh, I want to feel the other cities different temperature in, in their since, uh, session.

✓ I want to experience the different temperatures in their seasons.

Word order and wrong words: 'feel the other cities different temperature' should be 'experience the different temperatures'. 'since' and 'session' are wrong; correct word is 'seasons'. Use plural 'seasons' and correct preposition 'in their seasons.'

× I want to know.

✓ I want to know more about how the climate affects life there.

Ellipsis and lack of object: 'I want to know' is incomplete in context. Add the object to make the sentence meaningful: 'I want to know more about how the climate affects life there.'