Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly with correct grammar, then add one specific supporting detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences. Avoid irrelevant phrasing like “that time”.

Example: I live in a place with cool winters and mild summers. I prefer cold weather because I enjoy hot soups and stews in winter, which make me feel comfortable and cosy.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, use correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases. Provide one or two concise reasons linked with linking words (e.g. because, and).

Example: I prefer cold weather. Because it lets me wear warm clothes comfortably and I can enjoy winter dishes, I feel more relaxed and cosy during cold months.

Suggestion: Clarify the choice (dry or wet), use accurate adjectives (e.g. energetic, sweaty) and give a specific reason. Avoid vague or incorrect words like “hotty” or “holy”.

Example: I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I feel more energetic and can exercise outdoors without getting sweaty or uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Answer briefly and directly about frequency, then give a specific example when you check it. Use simple, correct phrasing (daily/weekly/only when).

Example: I don't check the forecast every day, but I usually look at it before I travel or go shopping. For instance, I check the forecast the night before a trip so I can pack appropriate clothes.

Suggestion: Give a clear, accurate statement about effects, then provide one specific example or consequence. Avoid confusing vocabulary (globalization vs global warming) and repetition.

Example: Climate change has caused more extreme and unpredictable weather lately. For example, in northern India we now see sudden temperature swings and heavier rainfall during what used to be dry months, which affects farming.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence about your interest, give a specific reason and a simple example of what you would do there. Keep to two or three sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit mountain cities because the cool, fresh air and scenery are very different from my home. I would enjoy hiking and staying in a cabin to experience the peaceful atmosphere.

× I really like cold weather because that time I eat my favorite meals.

✓ I really like cold weather because at that time I eat my favorite meals.

Grammar problem type ID: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. The student used 'that time' incorrectly; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate a specific time ('at that time'). Use 'at that time' to specify when you eat your favorite meals.

× As the elite said, I like to cold weather because it is very because it was a It is a time when I enjoy my favorite meals.

✓ As others have said, I like cold weather because it is a time when I enjoy my favorite meals.

Grammar problem type ID:12 Incorrect use of pronouns / 26 Sentence structure errors. The phrase 'As the elite said' is incorrect and unclear; use 'As others have said'. 'I like to cold weather' is wrong: use 'I like cold weather'. Remove redundant fragments 'because it is very because it was a It is a'. Keep a single clear clause: 'it is a time when I enjoy my favorite meals.'

× Moreover, that time I feel very cozy.

✓ Moreover, at that time I feel very cozy.

Grammar problem type ID:11 Incorrect use of prepositions. Use 'at that time' to indicate a specific period. Also maintain adverb placement before adjective 'very cozy' is correct.

× I prefer better weather because that time I feel holy.

✓ I prefer dry weather because at that time I feel healthy and comfortable.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. 'Better weather' is vague; the question asked dry or wet, so 'dry weather' fits. 'Holy' is the wrong adjective for feeling well; use 'healthy' or 'comfortable'. Also use 'at that time' for time reference.

× Energetic because in heat, uh, because in summers I usually feel wetty.

✓ I feel more energetic because in the heat, in summer I usually feel sweaty.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 6 Present tense issue. 'Wetty' is not a correct adjective; use 'sweaty'. Use simple present 'I feel' consistently. 'In summer' is the correct time expression; 'in the heat' clarifies cause.

× Well I am not a bachelor to check weather on daily basis but yeah whenever I go to mall want any specific place that time I check because of because I do some preparation in advance if anything happening.

✓ Well, I am not in the habit of checking the weather on a daily basis, but whenever I go to a mall or to a specific place I check because I need to prepare in advance if anything happens.

Grammar problem type ID:12 Incorrect use of pronouns/phrases and 26 Sentence structure errors and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. 'Not a bachelor' is incorrect; use 'not in the habit of'. Add articles: 'the weather', 'a mall', 'a daily basis'. Use 'if anything happens' (present simple) to express future contingency. Remove repeated words and clarify purpose.

× In recent years, climate change rapidly because of global warming.

✓ In recent years, climate change has accelerated because of global warming.

Grammar problem type ID:6 Present tense issue and 5 Past tense issue. The sentence needs present perfect 'has accelerated' to describe a change occurring over recent years. 'Rapidly' as an adverb could work but 'has accelerated' is more natural.

× For example, I live in northern part of India, so they are so there are a mixture of the mixture of weather, but because of globalization, because of because of horizontal becoming big a lot of days that.

✓ For example, I live in the northern part of India, so there is a mixture of weather. However, due to climate change, the weather patterns have become more extreme and unpredictable.

Grammar problem type ID:17 Incorrect use of the definite article and 26 Sentence structure errors and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. Add 'the' before 'northern part of India'. Replace unclear and incorrect phrases ('they are so', 'mixture of the mixture', 'horizontal becoming big') with clear meaning: 'weather patterns have become more extreme and unpredictable due to climate change.' Use present perfect 'have become' for recent changes.

× Yes, I really fascinating about to visit in mountains because at mountains they are totally a different weather from from my location.

✓ Yes, I'm really fascinated to visit the mountains because the weather there is totally different from my location.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. 'I really fascinating' is incorrect; use 'I'm really fascinated' or 'I really want to visit'. Use 'the mountains' and 'the weather there' and 'different from my location.' Remove duplicate 'from'.

× So that's why I visit there.

✓ So that's why I want to visit there.

Grammar problem type ID:7 Future tense issue. The student intended to express desire to visit in the future; use 'want to visit' or 'plan to visit'. 'I visit there' is present simple and unnatural here.

× Whenever I visit there, I feel I feel I visit any another place.

✓ Whenever I visit there, I feel like I am visiting a different place.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors and 6 Present tense issue. The original is repetitive and unclear. Use 'I feel like I am visiting a different place' to express the sense of novelty when visiting the mountains. Use continuous 'am visiting' to describe the experience.