Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và tính mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít ("my country have" → "my country has"), sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ dùng sai (ví dụ "fridge" không dùng để làm mát người) và giảm độ dài lủng củng; sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như "air conditioner" và "fans"; giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Example: My country, Vietnam, has a tropical climate. Summers are very hot and humid, so most families use air conditioners and fans to stay cool. People also try to avoid going outside during the hottest hours.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp, rõ ràng ý chính và tránh phát ngôn không phù hợp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng ("I prefer warm weather") rồi giải thích nguyên nhân hợp lý. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi từ ngữ nghiêm trọng ("have sex" là hoàn toàn không phù hợp và có thể gây hiểu lầm); thay bằng cụm từ đúng nghĩa như "feel sick" hoặc "get ill" nếu ý muốn nói sức khỏe ảnh hưởng bởi lạnh.

Example: I prefer warm weather because I feel more comfortable and energetic. I find cold weather hard to tolerate, as it often makes me feel stiff and more likely to catch a cold.

Suggestion: Làm rõ ý và dùng từ chính xác; tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích cụ thể vì sao (ví dụ: giao thông, quần áo ướt, cảm giác khó chịu). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, therefore).

Example: I prefer dry weather because rainy conditions make everything wet and uncomfortable. For example, roads can become slippery and it is difficult to travel, and clothes often stay damp for a long time.

Suggestion: Cải thiện trật tự câu và diễn đạt tự nhiên. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu tần suất và khi nào kiểm tra, rồi giải thích lý do ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi thì ("I don't want I will..."), loại bỏ lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house. I do this to avoid getting caught in the rain and forgetting my umbrella.

Suggestion: Nâng cao độ chính xác và cụ thể của ý tưởng. Bắt đầu bằng câu tổng quát, sau đó liệt kê một hoặc hai hệ quả cụ thể (nhiệt độ tăng, mực nước biển, thời tiết cực đoan) và cung cấp ví dụ hoặc kết quả. Chú ý ngữ pháp ("is directly affect" → "directly affects" hoặc "has affected").

Example: Climate change has affected the environment in several ways. For example, average temperatures have risen, leading to more frequent heatwaves and changes in rainfall patterns, which can cause floods and droughts.

Suggestion: Làm rõ câu trả lời ("Yes" or "No") và giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa từ sai ("deny" không phù hợp). Nêu nơi cụ thể và lý do (ví dụ: đi lên miền Bắc để trốn nóng). Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates. For instance, my family often travels to the northern regions in summer because the weather is much cooler there and more comfortable for sightseeing.

× In Vietnam my country have tropical climate so in the summer it is really hard to stay so almost family.

✓ In Vietnam, my country has a tropical climate, so in the summer it is really hard to stay at home for many families.

'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'my country' (singular/plural issue). 'Tropical climate' needs 'a' (article) and plural 'almost family' is unclear; replace with 'many families'. Add 'at home' for clarity.

× Easily use air conditioner and fridge frequently to warm.

✓ People frequently use air conditioners and fans to keep warm.

Sentence lacked a clear subject and used 'fridge' incorrectly. Use plural 'air conditioners' and a suitable device 'fans' and correct word order: subject + verb + object. 'Easily' was unnecessary and misused.

× I prefer warm weather to them but if I merge to choose, I will choose what cold or hot weather because I can't can't tolerate cold conditions and I easily I easily have sex in this weather.

✓ I prefer warm weather, but if I were forced to choose, I would choose warm weather because I can't tolerate cold conditions and I feel uncomfortable in that weather.

Multiple problems: 'to them' is wrong; use comparative preference structure. 'If I merge to choose' should be 'if I were forced to choose' (conditional). Use 'would' for hypothetical future. Repeated 'can't' and 'I easily have sex' is nonsensical and likely a mis-saying; replaced with 'feel uncomfortable'. Tense and modality corrected.

× I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in wet weather the flowering is wet so my family members easy to fold fold out and my umm upper Rd. will.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in wet weather the flowers get wet, so my family members find it difficult to go out.

'Flowering is wet' is awkward; use 'flowers get wet'. 'Easy to fold fold out' is incorrect: replace with 'find it difficult to go out'. Remove unclear fragment 'my umm upper Rd. will'.

× Yes I am. I easily check weather forecast before I go outside because I don't want I will umm, damper in the rain because I forget. I forgot the umbrella. Umbrella.

✓ Yes, I am. I usually check the weather forecast before I go outside because I don't want to get wet in the rain if I forget my umbrella.

Use 'usually' instead of 'easily'. Fix verb phrase 'don't want to get wet' and correct conditional 'if I forget my umbrella'. Remove repetition and fix tense consistency.

× I can see that the effect of climate change is directly affect the environment and their temperature.

✓ I can see that the effects of climate change directly affect the environment and its temperature.

Use plural 'effects' when referring generally. 'Is directly affect' is wrong: use present tense agreement 'directly affect'. 'Their temperature' should be 'its temperature' referring to 'environment' (singular) or 'temperatures' if plural.

× For example, in the summer I can see that the greenhouse effect is increasing.

✓ For example, in recent summers I have noticed that the greenhouse effect seems to be increasing.

Improve tense to present perfect 'have noticed' for recent observations and add 'seems to be' for nuance. 'In the summer' is changed to 'in recent summers' for clarity.

× Yes I deny especially in the summer my family usually go outside and we usually go North Country to which have a cool weather and umm.

✓ Yes, I do. Especially in the summer my family usually go away and we often go to the northern regions, which have cool weather.

'I deny' is incorrect for affirmation; use 'I do'. 'Go outside' intended 'go away' or 'travel'. Add 'to' before destination. 'North Country' corrected to 'the northern regions'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'family usually go' is acceptable in some dialects but 'my family usually go' can be 'my family usually goes' (singular). Here 'we often go' is clearer.