Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry.' Also, avoid redundancy like 'to to'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as 'because' to explain why you prefer fruits and nuts. Try to complete your thoughts clearly.

Example: I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry because it helps me stay focused. I prefer to eat fruits and nuts since they are healthy and provide energy.

Suggestion: Make sure to use correct vocabulary and complete your sentences. Instead of 'fruitful of vitamins and fib', say 'full of vitamins and fiber'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences like 'and even help you to'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' properly to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I believe eating snacks is healthy because they are full of vitamins and fiber. They help me stay healthy, give me energy, and improve my concentration.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. For example, say 'When I was a child, I used to eat snacks such as chips or popcorn.' Avoid incomplete sentences like 'I enjoy eating snacks and.' Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, when I was a child, I used to eat snacks such as chips or popcorn because I enjoyed their taste and texture.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but improve vocabulary by using correct words like 'fiber' instead of 'fib'. Also, use plural form for 'banana' as 'bananas' when talking generally. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why you like these snacks.

Example: I like to eat fruits and nuts, especially apples and bananas, because they are delicious, healthy, full of vitamins and fiber, and give me energy.

× I usually snacks between lunch or dinner I when I feel a bit hungry.

✓ I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry.

The word 'snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'eat' not 'snacks'. Also, 'between lunch or dinner' should be 'between lunch and dinner' because 'between' is used with 'and' not 'or'. The phrase 'I when' is incorrect and should be 'when'.

× It's helped me to to be focused and I prefer to eat fruits and nuts because it has no.

✓ It helps me to be focused and I prefer to eat fruits and nuts because they have no sugar.

'It's helped' is past participle but the context is present habitual action, so 'It helps' is correct. Also, 'to to' is a repetition error. 'Fruits and nuts' is plural, so 'it has no' should be 'they have no'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'sugar' clarifies the meaning.

× I usually snacks between lunch or dinner I when I feel a bit hungry.

✓ I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry.

The preposition 'between' should be followed by 'and' not 'or'. So 'between lunch or dinner' is incorrect; it should be 'between lunch and dinner'.

× Yes, when I in a childhood I used to eating a snack such as chips or popcorn.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to eat snacks such as chips or popcorn.

'Used to' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'in a childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'was a child'.

× Yes, when I in a childhood I used to eating a snack such as chips or popcorn.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to eat snacks such as chips or popcorn.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because examples given are plural. Also, 'in a childhood' is incorrect; 'was a child' is correct.

× I'd like to eat fruit and nuts, especially apples or banana.

✓ I'd like to eat fruit and nuts, especially apples or bananas.

'Banana' should be plural 'bananas' to match 'apples' and because it refers to the general category of fruits.

× I usually snacks between lunch or dinner I when I feel a bit hungry.

✓ I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry.

The preposition 'between' should be used with 'and' not 'or'.

× It's helped me to keep healthy and give me energy and even help you to.

✓ It helps me to keep healthy, gives me energy, and even helps you too.

'It's helped' is past participle but context requires present tense 'It helps'. Also, verbs should agree with singular subject: 'gives' and 'helps'. The sentence ending 'help you to' is incomplete; 'helps you too' is clearer.