Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your sentences shorter and more direct. Also, avoid repeating the word 'protein' multiple times. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the morning because I need a healthy breakfast while cutting. For example, I have protein oats with milk, which provides about 25 grams of protein.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and lacks clarity. Avoid using informal words like 'cause'. Also, explain why breakfast or snacks are important to make your answer more complete and natural.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks in the morning is healthy because breakfast provides essential energy and nutrients that our body needs to function well throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer has some confusion and informal language. The time '6:00 PM' seems incorrect for school in the morning. Use formal linking words like 'because' and clarify your answer with correct details.

Example: No, I did not often eat snacks in the morning when I was young because my school started very early, so I did not have time to eat before going.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'snacks' multiple times and try to add a reason why you like them.

Example: I usually eat two omelettes and protein oats as snacks because they are healthy and delicious.

× I usually eat my snacks in the morning which is full of protein which includes the protein oats with milk which contains mostly around 25 grams of protein.

✓ I usually eat my snacks in the morning, which are full of protein, including protein oats with milk that contain mostly around 25 grams of protein.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'which is' referring to 'snacks' which is plural, so it should be 'which are'. Also, 'includes the protein oats' is awkward; 'including protein oats' is better. 'Which contains' should agree with 'oats and milk' (plural), so 'that contain' is correct. Proper preposition and relative pronoun usage improves clarity.

× As I am in cutting so I need a healthy breakfast.

✓ As I am cutting, I need a healthy breakfast.

The phrase 'in cutting' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'cutting' (referring to a diet phase). Also, 'so' is redundant after 'as' and should be removed to avoid conjunction misuse.

× Yes, it's healthy to eat snacks cause the morning breakfast is very much important for our body.

✓ Yes, it's healthy to eat snacks because breakfast in the morning is very important for our body.

'Cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' in formal speech. 'The morning breakfast' is awkward; 'breakfast in the morning' is clearer. 'Very much important' is incorrect; 'very important' is the correct form.

× No, when I was young, I didn't eat snacks in the morning, 'cause there was this school in the morning at 6:00 PM, so I didn't have time to eat snacks.

✓ No, when I was young, I didn't eat snacks in the morning because school started at 6:00 AM, so I didn't have time to eat snacks.

'There was this school in the morning at 6:00 PM' is incorrect; it should be 'school started at 6:00 AM'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for clarity and formality. The time '6:00 PM' contradicts 'in the morning' and is corrected to '6:00 AM'.

× I often like 2 omelettes and protein oats for my snacks which is also healthy and delicious to me, so I most often eat those snacks.

✓ I often like 2 omelettes and protein oats for my snacks, which are also healthy and delicious to me, so I most often eat those snacks.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to plural '2 omelettes and protein oats', so it should be followed by 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.