Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid repeating phrases such as 'really a cup of tea, really'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy to sound more natural and effective.

Example: I usually eat snacks around 6:00 pm when I return home from work. At that time, I feel tired and hungry, so having some light snacks with a cup of tea helps me recharge. It's also a good opportunity to spend quality time with my family.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'choose' should be 'chooses'). Use linking words like 'however' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: It depends on the types of snacks people choose. Healthy snacks such as nuts, yogurt, or fruits can be beneficial for health. However, eating too many fried or sugary snacks may lead to health problems like diabetes. Therefore, I believe snacking is healthy if done in moderation and with the right choices.

Suggestion: Pay attention to verb tense consistency (use past tense 'took' instead of 'take') and correct word choice ('next one' should be 'snacks'). Also, avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'brings become brings back'.

Example: Yes, when I was younger, I often took light snacks such as puffed rice mixed with mustard oil, green cheese, and onions. These snacks were not only tasty but also reminded me of the fun times I had with my cousins during school holidays. Even now, thinking about these snacks brings back many memories.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words like 'uh' and maintain consistent verb tense ('reminded' should be 'remind'). Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Example: I usually enjoy light snacks such as puffed rice, samosas, and sometimes yogurt. I also like local foods like rasgulla and Sandesh. These snacks are not only tasty but also remind me of the fun times I spent with my friends during childhood.

× If someone choose healthy snacks such as nuts, yogurts, or fruits, then it can be beneficial uh for health.

✓ If someone chooses healthy snacks such as nuts, yogurts, or fruits, then it can be beneficial uh for health.

The subject 'someone' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'chooses' instead of 'choose'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English grammar.

× But if someone choose too many fried or sugar snacks, it can lead to health problems such as diabetes uh.

✓ But if someone chooses too many fried or sugary snacks, it can lead to health problems such as diabetes uh.

Again, 'someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'chooses'. Also, 'sugar snacks' should be 'sugary snacks' because 'sugary' is the correct adjective form to describe snacks containing sugar.

× Yes, when I was a bit younger, I often take some light snacks such as puffed rice mixed with mustard oil, green cheese and onions.

✓ Yes, when I was a bit younger, I often took some light snacks such as puffed rice mixed with mustard oil, green cheese and onions.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a bit younger'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'took' instead of 'take' to maintain tense consistency.

× Those next one not only tasty but also reminded me of the fun time I had with my cousins during school holidays.

✓ Those snacks are not only tasty but also remind me of the fun times I had with my cousins during school holidays.

The phrase 'Those next one' is incorrect; it should be 'Those snacks'. Also, 'not only tasty but also reminded' mixes present and past tense; it should be 'are not only tasty but also remind' to keep present tense consistent. 'Fun time' should be plural 'fun times' to match the context.

× Even now, thinking about the snacks brings become brings back a lot of memories.

✓ Even now, thinking about the snacks brings back a lot of memories.

The phrase 'brings become brings back' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'brings back' to indicate recalling memories. This corrects the verb phrase and maintains present tense.

× Those snacks are not only tasty but also reminded me of the fun times I spent uh, with my friends, uh, during my childhood.

✓ Those snacks are not only tasty but also remind me of the fun times I spent uh, with my friends, uh, during my childhood.

The sentence mixes present tense 'are' with past tense 'reminded'. To maintain tense consistency, 'reminded' should be changed to 'remind' because the snacks still evoke memories now.