Snacks— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Candidate
Well, it's usually in the evening because most of my time is spent outside and I was pretty busy during these days. I only go home at 9:00 so I want to eat snacks at that time.
Examiner
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Candidate
Actually, all of us know that eating snacks isn't healthy for our physical health, but I think is pretty beneficial for my mental health. When I eat snacks, it can lift my mood immediately.
Examiner
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Candidate
Yes, I ate lots of snacks like biscuits, candies and spicy strips you known and a little spicy Chinese food that once well known on Internet.
Examiner
What snacks do you like to eat?
Candidate
I like to eat biscuits, candies and spicy strips but my favorite snacks are the spicy strips, you know not a little and spicy Chinese food that once well known on Internet.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免时态混乱和冗余。可以直接说明通常吃零食的时间，并简要说明原因。
Example: I usually eat snacks in the evening because I spend most of my day outside and get home late, around 9 pm.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答时应注意语法完整，避免句子不完整。可以用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明为什么零食对心理健康有益。
Example: Although eating snacks is not good for physical health, I believe it helps my mental health because it lifts my mood quickly when I feel stressed.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中应避免语法错误和表达不清，使用更准确的词汇和句式。可以具体描述喜欢的零食种类并简要说明。
Example: Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks such as biscuits, candies, and spicy strips, which were popular Chinese snacks at that time.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答应更简洁明了，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以直接列举喜欢的零食并说明最喜欢的种类。
Example: I like biscuits, candies, and spicy strips, but my favorite snack is spicy strips because of their unique flavor.
Grammar
× Well, it's usually in the evening because most of my time is spent outside and I was pretty busy during these days.
✓ Well, it's usually in the evening because most of my time is spent outside and I have been pretty busy these days.
这里使用了过去时态"was"，但句子中提到的"these days"表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成时态"have been"，表示从过去持续到现在的状态。
× Yes, I ate lots of snacks like biscuits, candies and spicy strips you known and a little spicy Chinese food that once well known on Internet.
✓ Yes, I ate lots of snacks like biscuits, candies and spicy strips you know, and a little spicy Chinese food that was once well known on the Internet.
"you known"应为"you know"，因为"know"是现在时态，且"you"是主语。"once well known on Internet"缺少动词"was"，且"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"。
× I like to eat biscuits, candies and spicy strips but my favorite snacks are the spicy strips, you know not a little and spicy Chinese food that once well known on Internet.
✓ I like to eat biscuits, candies and spicy strips, but my favorite snacks are the spicy strips, you know, not a little spicy Chinese food that was once well known on the Internet.
句中"you know not a little and spicy Chinese food"结构混乱，应调整为"you know, not a little spicy Chinese food"。同时，"once well known on Internet"缺少动词"was"，且"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"。
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