Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by removing unnecessary words and clarifying your reason. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: I usually eat snacks on weekends because I often meet my friends from work then. We like to enjoy some snacks together during our gatherings.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your opinion.

Example: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat. However, I sometimes eat them to enjoy life in moderation.

Suggestion: Improve your grammar by using the correct tense and article. Also, provide more specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, when I was young, I used to eat snacks daily with my friends at school. We enjoyed sharing different kinds of snacks during our breaks.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more description and linking words to explain why you like golgappa.

Example: I like many snacks such as golgappa, spring rolls, and manchurians, but my favourite is golgappa because it is spicy and tangy, which makes it very tasty.

× I usually eat a snacks every weekend because I'm a friend from the work.

✓ I usually eat snacks every weekend because I'm a friend from work.

The word 'snacks' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. Also, 'the work' is incorrect here; 'work' as an uncountable noun does not need an article in this context.

× That's why I prefer eating a snacks on the weekend.

✓ That's why I prefer eating snacks on the weekend.

Again, 'snacks' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed to match the plural noun.

× I usually eat a snacks every weekend because I'm a friend from the work.

✓ I usually eat snacks every weekend because I'm a friend from work.

The preposition 'from the work' is incorrect; 'work' as an uncountable noun does not require 'the' or 'from' here. 'Friend from work' is the correct phrase.

× I think that it is not healthy for the health just to uh, I eat just to enjoy my life with small Sound of Music.

✓ I think that it is not healthy for my health; I eat just to enjoy my life with a little Sound of Music.

The phrase 'for the health' is incorrect; it should be 'for my health' to indicate personal health. Also, 'small Sound of Music' is unclear; 'a little Sound of Music' or 'some Sound of Music' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I remember that when I was young I uh, daily eat a snacks with my friends in the school.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was young I used to eat snacks daily with my friends at school.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense or past habitual form 'used to eat' to match the past time frame. Also, 'a snacks' is incorrect; 'snacks' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'In the school' should be 'at school' for correct preposition use.

× Yes, I remember that when I was young I uh, daily eat a snacks with my friends in the school.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was young I used to eat snacks daily with my friends at school.

The preposition 'in the school' is incorrect here; 'at school' is the correct phrase to indicate location in this context.

× Yes, I remember that when I was young I uh, daily eat a snacks with my friends in the school.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was young I used to eat snacks daily with my friends at school.

The phrase 'a snacks' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'.

× There are many snacks like golgappa, spring rolls, manchurians, but I like the golgappa.

✓ There are many snacks like golgappa, spring rolls, and manchurian, but I like golgappa.

The plural form 'manchurians' is incorrect; 'manchurian' is used as an uncountable or singular noun in this context. Also, 'the golgappa' is incorrect; no article is needed before 'golgappa' when speaking generally.