Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words to make it coherent. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 5 sentences.

Example: I usually eat snacks when I watch movies because it makes the experience more enjoyable. For example, I often have popcorn or chips during that time. Sometimes, if I feel bored, I might grab a quick snack like nuts or fruit.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and lacks clarity. Provide a clear opinion first, then explain with specific examples using linking words. Also, try to avoid filler words and grammatical errors.

Example: I think eating snacks is generally unhealthy, but there are healthier options available. For instance, some people prefer nuts or fruit instead of chips or sweets. Therefore, it depends on the type of snack you choose.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is a bit repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

Example: I did not eat snacks very often when I was young. However, I usually had a snack after school because I would feel hungry by that time. For example, I often ate biscuits or fruit to satisfy my hunger.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and lacks structure. Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and grammatical mistakes.

Example: I like to eat various snacks such as fries, chips, and chocolates. For example, I enjoy having chocolate bars when I want something sweet. These snacks often make me eat more than I should.

× when I used to movies on that time I will get some popcorn or Doritos

✓ when I used to watch movies at that time I would get some popcorn or Doritos

The phrase 'used to movies' is incorrect; the verb 'watch' is missing. Also, 'will get' should be 'would get' to match the past habitual action indicated by 'used to'. Use 'used to' with base verb to describe past habits and 'would' for repeated past actions.

× then I used to add some snack

✓ then I used to add some snacks

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to indicate some quantity. 'Used to add' is correct for past habitual action.

× then I will order something else

✓ then I would order something else

Since the context is past habitual actions, 'will' should be replaced with 'would' to maintain tense consistency.

× So in that particular time I used to eat often some snack item

✓ So at that particular time I used to often eat some snack items

The phrase 'eat often some snack item' has incorrect word order and singular/plural mismatch. 'Snack items' should be plural. 'Often' should be placed before the verb 'eat' for correct adverb placement.

× It's available for snack who are more healthy conscious, uh conscious about

✓ There are snacks available for those who are more health conscious

Incorrect preposition 'for snack who' should be 'for those who'. Also, 'healthy conscious' is incorrect; the correct term is 'health conscious'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So there are healthy and non healthy snacks are available and it depends

✓ So there are healthy and non-healthy snacks available and it depends

The phrase 'are healthy and non healthy snacks are available' has redundant 'are'. Also, 'non healthy' should be hyphenated as 'non-healthy'. The sentence is corrected for redundancy and proper adjective form.

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young? Actually not often. Most of the time I used to have snack when when I was young

✓ Did you often eat snacks when you were young? Actually, not often. Most of the time I used to have snacks when I was young

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to indicate some quantity. The repeated word 'when' is removed for clarity.

× because when I get off the school or college I used to eat snack because after some time I used to get bit hungry

✓ because when I got off school or college I used to eat snacks because after some time I used to get a bit hungry

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context. 'Eat snack' should be 'eat snacks' for plural. 'Get bit hungry' should be 'get a bit hungry' with article 'a'.

× So forget rid of that I used to have that

✓ So to get rid of that I used to have that

The phrase 'forget rid of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to get rid of'. This is a common prepositional phrase error.

× Actually there are more snack I like to eat like fries, chips and some chocolate items so on

✓ Actually, there are more snacks I like to eat like fries, chips and some chocolate items and so on

'More snack' should be 'more snacks' to indicate plural. Added 'and' before 'so on' for correct conjunction.

× So it make me, uh, eat a lot

✓ So it makes me, uh, eat a lot

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' in present tense.