Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答が少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、簡潔に理由を述べ、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

Example: I usually eat snacks as a reward when I accomplish something. For example, I love chocolate because its taste and smell make me feel relaxed.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい文法を使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

Example: To be honest, I don't think snacks are healthy because they contain a lot of sugar, which can harm the body if eaten too much.

Suggestion: 質問に直接答えた後、具体的な例を挙げていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。より自然な表現と正しい文法を使い、感情の説明を明確にしましょう。

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I loved them. For example, chocolate and candy made me feel happy and energetic.

Suggestion: 理由と結果を述べていますが、文法の誤りと繰り返しがあります。接続詞を使って論理的に話し、語彙を工夫すると良いでしょう。

Example: I really like chocolate because it contains sugar, which helps me concentrate. So, I often eat chocolate or candy before studying.

× there are so much Yum for me and makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ there is so much yum for me and it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns and requires singular verb 'is'. Also, 'Yum' should be lowercase and the sentence needs 'it' as the subject for 'makes'.

× I don't think snacks is healthy for our body because there are contains so many sugar

✓ I don't think snacks are healthy for our body because they contain so much sugar

'Snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' and 'they contain'. 'Sugar' is uncountable, so 'much' is used instead of 'many'.

× the snacks makes my body bad condition.

✓ the snacks make my body in bad condition.

'Snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'make'. Also, 'in bad condition' is the correct phrase.

× I often eat snacks a lot because I really love the snacks.

✓ I often ate snacks a lot because I really loved the snacks.

The sentence refers to past habits, so past tense verbs 'ate' and 'loved' should be used.

× by eating them my feel, my feeling is so well, like umm, high.

✓ by eating them, my feelings are so good, like umm, high.

'My feel' is incorrect; 'my feelings' is correct. Also, 'is so well' should be 'are so good' to agree with plural 'feelings'.

× I really like chocolate to be honest because they have they contain a lot of sugar.

✓ I really like chocolate to be honest because it contains a lot of sugar.

'Chocolate' is uncountable singular, so 'it contains' is correct instead of 'they have they contain'.