Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de fluidité naturelle et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus simples et correctes, et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, utilisez des expressions comme "I usually have snacks twice a week as a little treat, but I try to avoid snacks with too much sugar."

Example: I usually have snacks twice a week as a little treat, but I try to avoid snacks with too much sugar to stay healthy.

Suggestion: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente, et soyez plus précis dans vos choix de vocabulaire. Par exemple, dites "I think eating snacks in moderation is healthy because I avoid excessive amounts. I usually choose snacks with less sugar or salty snacks like crunchy crackers."

Example: I think eating snacks in moderation is healthy because I avoid excessive amounts. I usually choose snacks with less sugar or salty snacks like crunchy crackers.

Suggestion: Votre réponse contient des erreurs de temps et de grammaire, et manque de fluidité. Utilisez le passé simple correctement et améliorez la structure de la phrase. Par exemple, "Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, and I was tempted by sugary snacks. For example, my favorite snack was rainbow sneakers, which are very sweet."

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, and I was tempted by sugary snacks. For example, my favorite snack was rainbow sneakers, which are very sweet.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause de la grammaire et du vocabulaire incorrects. Essayez de formuler une phrase claire et cohérente, en utilisant un vocabulaire approprié. Par exemple, "I used to prefer snacks with a lot of sugar, but now I choose healthier options, such as protein bars."

Example: I used to prefer snacks with a lot of sugar, but now I choose healthier options, such as protein bars.

× I like snacks because I think it's additional treat for daily life, but now I'm very carefully avoid some snacks that too much sugar.

✓ I like snacks because I think it's an additional treat for daily life, but now I'm very careful to avoid some snacks that have too much sugar.

The adjective 'additional' needs the article 'an' before it. 'Carefully' is an adverb but the sentence requires the adjective 'careful' to describe the subject 'I'. Also, 'avoid' should be preceded by 'to' to form the infinitive 'to avoid'. Lastly, 'that too much sugar' is incomplete; it should be 'that have too much sugar' to correctly describe the snacks.

× I usually choose like snacks contain less sugar or for salty one I prefer to eat the crunchy cake.

✓ I usually choose snacks that contain less sugar, or for salty ones, I prefer to eat crunchy cakes.

The phrase 'choose like snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'choose snacks that'. Also, 'for salty one' should be plural 'for salty ones' to match the plural noun 'snacks'. 'The crunchy cake' should be plural 'crunchy cakes' to generalize the preference.

× Yes, I often eat snacks when I was young and I was tempted to eat like snacks contain a lot of sugar.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young and I was tempted to eat snacks that contained a lot of sugar.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame 'when I was young'. 'Like snacks contain' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks that contained' to correctly describe the snacks in past tense.

× For example, my favorite snacks when I was a kid is rainbow sneakers which is very sweet.

✓ For example, my favorite snack when I was a kid was rainbow sneakers, which are very sweet.

'Snacks' is plural but 'is' is singular; the verb should agree with the subject. Since 'rainbow sneakers' is plural, the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'favorite snacks' should be singular 'favorite snack' if referring to one item, but since 'rainbow sneakers' is plural, the subject and verb should be plural.

× I used to prefer the snack contain a lot of sugar, but now I prefer to choose what's next. Have some healthy? Ingredient, for example protein snakes.

✓ I used to prefer snacks that contain a lot of sugar, but now I prefer to choose healthier options. For example, protein snacks.

'Snack contain' should be 'snacks that contain' to correctly use plural and relative clause. 'What's next. Have some healthy? Ingredient' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'healthier options'. 'Protein snakes' is a typo and should be 'protein snacks'.