Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but includes filler words and lacks coherence. Try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and organize your answer logically with linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question, such as brushing teeth after eating snacks, unless relevant.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 or 4 PM, because I feel hungry between meals. After snacking, I make sure to brush my teeth to keep them clean.

Suggestion: Your answer is too brief and repetitive. To improve, provide a clear opinion and support it with specific examples or reasons. Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose the right ones. For example, fruits and nuts are nutritious, but eating too many sugary snacks can be harmful.

Suggestion: Your answer has repetition and filler words that reduce clarity. Also, the sentence structure is confusing. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I especially liked sweet cookies because they tasted delicious, but I also tried to choose healthy options like fruits.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but very brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, add reasons or preferences to make your answer more informative and engaging, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I like eating fruits because they are fresh and healthy. However, I also enjoy chips and chocolate occasionally as treats because they taste good.

× And after eating next I brush my teeth.

✓ And after eating, I brush my teeth next.

The phrase 'after eating next' is incorrectly ordered. The correct order is 'after eating, I brush my teeth next' to maintain proper sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, but I'll kind of like like sweet cookies, Uh, and they, they tasted delicious and I choose healthy options though.

✓ Yes, but I kind of liked sweet cookies, uh, and they tasted delicious, and I chose healthy options though.

The use of 'I'll' (I will) is incorrect when referring to past habits. The past tense 'liked' and 'chose' should be used to match the past time frame indicated by 'when you were young'.