Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and includes a question back to the examiner, which is not appropriate. Try to answer directly and clearly when you usually eat snacks, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, especially after school. For example, I like to have biscuits because they taste delicious and give me energy.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many snacks contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can harm my health if I eat them often.

Suggestion: Your answer is not natural because babies usually start eating snacks after they have teeth. Also, the tense is inconsistent. Try to answer directly and provide a more realistic explanation.

Example: I didn't eat many snacks when I was very young because I was still a baby and couldn't eat solid food yet.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks detail. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples using linking words to make your answer more interesting.

Example: I like to eat biscuits because they are sweet and crunchy. For example, chocolate biscuits are my favorite because they taste delicious and satisfy my sweet tooth.

× I always eat snacks sometimes and always.

✓ I sometimes eat snacks.

The adverbs 'always' and 'sometimes' are contradictory and incorrectly placed together, causing confusion. 'Sometimes' should be used alone to indicate occasional snacking.

× What's your favorite snack? And my favorite snack is biscuits.

✓ My favorite snack is biscuits.

The sentence 'What's your favorite snack?' is inappropriate as a response to the examiner's question. The student should directly answer the question without asking another question.

× Wait because it's so yummy.

✓ I like it because it's so yummy.

The word 'Wait' is incorrectly used here. The sentence should express a reason for liking the snack, so 'I like it because it's so yummy.' is appropriate.

× No it isn't because because it has and some other snacks kinda has a lot of sugar.

✓ No, it isn't healthy because it and some other snacks have a lot of sugar.

The sentence has repeated 'because' and incorrect conjunctions. Also, subject-verb agreement is incorrect ('has' should be 'have'). The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Because it's so unhealthy.

✓ They are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without a main clause results in a fragment. The sentence is corrected to be complete and clear.

× I didn't eat snacks when I was young because I don't have teeth yet.

✓ I didn't eat snacks when I was young because I didn't have teeth yet.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Both clauses should be in the past tense to maintain consistency.