Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of saying 'who get angry', say 'who gets angry'. Also, avoid absolute statements like 'at every situation' and try to be more specific or moderate. For example, you can say 'I am a short-tempered person and sometimes get angry and frustrated in certain situations.'

Example: No, I am a short-tempered person and sometimes get angry and frustrated in certain situations.

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and coherence by using linking words and clearer structure. For example, say 'There are two things that make me impatient: first, waiting for someone or something; second, tolerating things that are not right. I cannot support or ignore wrong things happening around me.'

Example: There are two things that make me impatient: first, waiting for someone or something; second, tolerating things that are not right. I cannot support or ignore wrong things happening around me.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'so just.' Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I get frustrated and tired and want to leave the situation, but sometimes I cannot, so I try to do it patiently.'

Example: I get frustrated and tired and want to leave the situation, but sometimes I cannot, so I try to do it patiently.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words. For example, 'Yes, because I have to work with different types of colleagues who have different mindsets and perceptions, I need a high level of tolerance.'

Example: Yes, because I have to work with different types of colleagues who have different mindsets and perceptions, I need a high level of tolerance.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and improve clarity. For example, 'I was more obstinate and impatient in my childhood than I am now. I used to get upset over every little thing, but over time, I have become a more patient and sensible person.'

Example: I was more obstinate and impatient in my childhood than I am now. I used to get upset over every little thing, but over time, I have become a more patient and sensible person.

× I am a short tempered person who get angry and frustrated at every situation.

✓ I am a short tempered person who gets angry and frustrated in every situation.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'gets' to agree in number. Also, 'at every situation' is better expressed as 'in every situation' for natural usage.

× There are two things that makes me impatient that are #1 that is waiting for some someone or something.

✓ There are two things that make me impatient: #1 is waiting for someone or something.

The subject 'two things' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'some someone' is incorrect; it should be 'someone'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And 2nd is to tolerate something that is not right.

✓ The second is tolerating something that is not right.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and not preferred in formal speech. Also, '2nd' should be written as 'second' and the phrase is better expressed as 'tolerating something' for grammatical correctness.

× Like I cannot support or I cannot see anything wrong happening around me.

✓ For example, I cannot support or tolerate seeing anything wrong happening around me.

Starting with 'Like' is informal and incorrect here; 'For example' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I get frustrated and tired and want to get out of that situation, but sometimes I cannot so just. Do it with patience.

✓ I get frustrated and tired and want to get out of that situation, but sometimes I cannot, so I just do it with patience.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and punctuation. 'Cannot so just. Do it' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot, so I just do it'. This correction improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Yes, as I have to sit with different types of colleague having different mindset and perception, I need high level of tolerance.

✓ Yes, as I have to sit with different types of colleagues having different mindsets and perceptions, I need a high level of tolerance.

'Colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to agree with 'different types'. Similarly, 'mindset' and 'perception' should be plural to match 'different'. Also, 'a high level' requires the article 'a'.

× I was more obstinate and impatient in my childhood than I am now.

✓ I was more obstinate and impatient in my childhood than I am now.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change.

× I used to get it every single stupid thing but with the time I am become more patient and sensible person I ever been.

✓ I used to get upset over every single stupid thing, but over time I have become a more patient and sensible person than I ever was.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Get it every single stupid thing' is unclear; 'get upset over every single stupid thing' is clearer. 'With the time' should be 'over time'. 'I am become' is incorrect; it should be 'I have become'. Also, 'person I ever been' should be 'person than I ever was' for correct comparison.