Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Жоопту түз жана так кылыңыз. Мисалы, "No, I am not a patient person because I often get impatient in various situations, such as at school or with my siblings." деп айтыңыз. Кайталоодон жана грамматикалык каталардан сак болуңуз.

Example: No, I am not a patient person because I often get impatient in various situations, such as at school or with my siblings.

Suggestion: Жоопту логикалык жана түшүнүктүү кылып түзүңүз. Мисалы, "My siblings and classmates make me impatient because sometimes they act in a way that makes me nervous." деп айтыңыз. Кайталоодон жана түшүнүксүз сөз айкаштарынан качыңыз.

Example: My siblings and classmates make me impatient because sometimes they act in a way that makes me nervous.

Suggestion: Жоопту так жана логикалык кылыңыз. Мисалы, "I feel annoyed and tired when I have to do something for a long time because it becomes boring." деп айтыңыз. Кайталоодон жана туура эмес сөз тандоодон сак болуңуз.

Example: I feel annoyed and tired when I have to do something for a long time because it becomes boring.

Suggestion: Жоопту грамматикалык жактан туура жана логикалык кылыңыз. Мисалы, "I am currently a student and do not have a job, but in the future, my job will require me to be patient because I will work with many people." деп айтыңыз.

Example: I am currently a student and do not have a job, but in the future, my job will require me to be patient because I will work with many people.

Suggestion: Жоопту так жана грамматикалык жактан туура кылыңыз. Мисалы, "Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because my noisy siblings used to make me impatient." деп айтыңыз.

Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because my noisy siblings used to make me impatient.

× I think I'm impatient person because I I'm really impatient with different situations, for instance in school with my siblings.

✓ I think I'm an impatient person because I'm really impatient with different situations, for instance in school with my siblings.

The noun 'person' is singular and requires the article 'an' before it. Also, the phrase 'I I'm' is redundant; it should be 'I'm'.

× Well, actually my siblings and my classmates make me made me impatient because there are very how is it very funny and I and it's can and it's made me nervous and made impatient.

✓ Well, actually my siblings and my classmates make me impatient because they are very, how is it, very funny and it makes me nervous and impatient.

The phrase 'make me made me' is incorrect; 'make me' should be used with the base verb 'impatient'. Also, 'there are' is incorrect here; 'they are' refers to siblings and classmates. The verb 'makes' agrees with singular subject 'it'.

× So when I have to do something for a long time, for me it's uh, annoying, noisy.

✓ So when I have to do something for a long time, for me it's annoying and noisy.

The sentence lacks conjunction 'and' to connect adjectives 'annoying' and 'noisy' properly.

× And when I do uh, something a long time, for me it's not interesting and I feel tired.

✓ And when I do something for a long time, for me it's not interesting and I feel tired.

The preposition 'for' is needed before 'a long time' to indicate duration.

× Nowadays I not have a job, I'm just a student, but in my future, my future job required a required Be patient because it can it.

✓ Nowadays I do not have a job, I'm just a student, but in my future, my future job will require me to be patient because it can be important.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present tense. Also, 'required a required Be patient' is incorrect; it should be 'will require me to be patient' to express future necessity.

× It is important and variety work.

✓ It is important and involves various work.

The phrase 'variety work' is incorrect; 'various work' or 'varied work' is appropriate. Also, a verb is needed to connect the ideas properly.

× I working with my I working with other peoples.

✓ I work with others.

The verb 'working' needs auxiliary 'am' to form present continuous, or use simple present 'work'. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural form.

× To be honest, nowadays I'm more patient than in my childhood because when I was a child I always grow up as my siblings and my siblings are so noisy and it's make me impatient person.

✓ To be honest, nowadays I'm more patient than in my childhood because when I was a child I always grew up with my siblings and my siblings were so noisy and they made me an impatient person.

The verb 'grow' should be past tense 'grew' to match 'when I was a child'. The preposition 'as' is incorrect; 'with' is appropriate. 'It's make' should be 'they made' to agree with plural subject 'siblings'. Also, 'impatient person' needs article 'an'.