Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，例如“children's”应为“children”，“delayed delayed flight”重复。建议注意单词的正确形式和避免重复，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Example: I would say it depends. I'm very patient with children because I find them cute, but I get upset and annoyed when flights are delayed.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“delayed flights”应为“a delayed flight”，“feel annoy”应为“feel annoyed”，“I feel knowing too”表达不清晰。建议加强语法和词汇准确性，避免重复。

Example: I feel annoyed when I have to wait for a delayed flight because it disrupts my plans. Also, waiting for someone who is late wastes my time, which makes me impatient.

Suggestion: 回答表达了情感和原因，但有语法错误，如“I'm very enjoy”应为“I really enjoy”，以及口语填充词较多。建议减少填充词，注意动词形式。

Example: I feel very happy when I do something for a long time. For example, I play the piano for 8 or 9 hours every day because I am very interested in it and my dream is to become a pianist.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“meet some difficult”应为“face some difficulties”，以及“practice patiently”应为“practice patiently”或“practice with patience”。建议注意词汇搭配和语法准确。

Example: Yes, because my major is piano, I have to play for 8 or 9 hours every day. Sometimes I face difficulties, so I need to practice patiently.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，如“played piano just keep”应为“only played piano for”，以及“interested about”应为“interested in”。建议改进句子结构和介词使用。

Example: Yes, when I was young, I only played the piano for two or three hours every day. But now I can play for 8 or 9 hours because I am very interested in it and want to become a pianist.

× I'm very patient with children's because I think they are very cute

✓ I'm very patient with children because I think they are very cute

children是复数形式，不能加所有格's，应该直接用复数形式children。

× When I have to wait for a delayed flights I feel annoy because it disrupts my plans.

✓ When I have to wait for delayed flights I feel annoyed because it disrupts my plans.

flights是复数，前面不需要加不定冠词a；annoy是动词，形容感受时应使用形容词annoyed。

× When I have to wait for a delayed flights I feel annoy because it disrupts my plans.

✓ When I have to wait for delayed flights I feel annoyed because it disrupts my plans.

feel后面应接形容词，annoy是动词，正确用法是annoyed表示感到烦恼。

× Also if I wait for someone who is late I will feel. I feel knowing too because it wastes wastes my time.

✓ Also if I wait for someone who is late I will feel annoyed too because it wastes my time.

knowing用法错误，应使用形容词annoyed表示感到烦恼；wastes重复，应去掉一个。

× so I'm very enjoy the music.

✓ so I really enjoy the music.

enjoy是动词，不能用very修饰，应使用副词really修饰动词。

× because I'm very interested about it and I want to become a pianist.

✓ because I'm very interested in it and I want to become a pianist.

interested后面应接介词in，表示对某事感兴趣。

× I played piano just keep two or three hours every day.

✓ I played piano just for two or three hours every day.

keep用法错误，表示持续时间应使用for；同时缺少介词for。