Patience— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are you a patient person?
Candidate
Uh, yes, I believe that I am a patient person because, umm, I have seen like many times, whenever there is a like stressful situation, I always remains like calm and uh, keep uh, silent and I, I always try to like, understand the situation. I and I also help my friends and my family members to be like, calm and like the different.
Examiner
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Candidate
To be honest, uh, most of the time, I, I mean like silent and uh, I am always like in a patience, but like there are some situations that do affect my patient level. So the situation that are like when a person like keep annoying me because of like behaving like disrespectful and I. I.
Examiner
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Candidate
When I like I have to do something for a long time, I feel bad. But uh, because like if we are trying to keep doing something and something and like suppose we are like motivating a person and he's like not getting motivated because of the situations, but still we are trying.
Examiner
Does your job require you to be patient?
Candidate
Uh, yes, definitely. My job requires me to be a patient because I work like in a, a gym. So it let's basically depend upon the patients because sometimes we have to deal with the customer that are very rude and sometimes if there is a like a defect in the machine. So people always like keep annoying you like to repair it as soon as possible and they are.
Examiner
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Candidate
Honestly, uh, it is true. Like I am now, I am more patient than I was a child because, uh, you know, like during the childhood, we are not that understanding to the situation that are like happening around ourselves. But for now we are like more mature. So it, it, it's depend upon the maturity level. So I can say like now I can deal with the situation as compared to.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Try to reduce filler words such as 'uh', 'umm', and 'like' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to support your points.
Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because in stressful situations, I remain calm and try to understand what is happening. For example, when my friends are upset, I listen carefully and help them stay calm.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Work on completing your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Use clear and concise language to express your ideas. Try to provide specific reasons or examples to explain what makes you impatient, and use linking words to organize your answer logically.
Example: Generally, I am patient, but I feel impatient when someone repeatedly annoys me by being disrespectful. For instance, if a colleague interrupts me constantly during work, it can be frustrating.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Avoid vague expressions and incomplete thoughts. Try to express your feelings clearly and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep your answer coherent and concise.
Example: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel tired. However, if I am helping someone stay motivated, I try to be patient even if progress is slow.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid filler words. Provide specific examples of situations at work that require patience. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more coherent.
Example: Yes, my job at the gym requires a lot of patience. For example, when customers are rude or when equipment breaks down, I need to stay calm and handle the situation professionally.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences to explain your ideas. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer and use linking words to improve coherence.
Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have become more mature and better at understanding situations. For instance, I can handle stressful events calmly, which I couldn't do before.
Grammar
× I always remains like calm and uh, keep uh, silent
✓ I always remain calm and keep silent
The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb without 's' in the present tense. 'Remains' is incorrect; it should be 'remain' to agree with the singular first-person subject.
× I and I also help my friends and my family members to be like, calm and like the different.
✓ I also help my friends and my family members to be calm and different.
The phrase 'I and I' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'like the different' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'calm and different' or simply 'calm.' The pronoun usage and phrasing need correction for clarity and grammar.
× I am always like in a patience
✓ I am always patient
The phrase 'in a patience' is incorrect. 'Patient' is an adjective and does not require a preposition here. The correct form is 'I am always patient.'
× the situation that are like when a person like keep annoying me
✓ the situations when a person keeps annoying me
The subject 'situation' is singular but used with 'are' which is plural. Also, 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular 'a person.' The corrected sentence uses plural 'situations' and correct verb forms.
× My job requires me to be a patient because I work like in a, a gym.
✓ My job requires me to be patient because I work in a gym.
The article 'a' before 'patient' is incorrect because 'patient' here is an adjective, not a noun. Also, 'like in a, a gym' is awkward; 'in a gym' is correct prepositional usage.
× we have to deal with the customer that are very rude
✓ we have to deal with customers that are very rude
'Customer' is singular but used with plural verb 'are.' It should be plural 'customers' to agree with 'are.'
× people always like keep annoying you like to repair it as soon as possible and they are.
✓ people always keep annoying you to repair it as soon as possible.
The phrase 'like keep annoying you like to repair it' is awkward and incorrect. Removing 'like' clarifies the sentence. The ending 'and they are' is incomplete and should be omitted.
× I am now, I am more patient than I was a child
✓ I am now more patient than I was as a child
The phrase 'than I was a child' is missing the preposition 'as' to compare states. The correct form is 'than I was as a child.'
× we are not that understanding to the situation that are like happening around ourselves
✓ we are not that understanding of the situations that are happening around us
The adjective 'understanding' is followed by 'of' not 'to.' Also, 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to agree with 'are.' 'Around ourselves' is incorrect; 'around us' is correct.
× the situation that are like happening around ourselves
✓ the situations that are happening around us
The subject 'situation' is singular but used with plural verb 'are.' It should be plural 'situations' to agree with the verb.
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