Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite short and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples to support your answer. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'collect my thing' and use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can wait calmly without getting frustrated, for example, when I have to wait in long queues or for my belongings to be ready.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and could be more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more detail about why this makes you impatient.

Example: I feel impatient when someone does not answer my calls or fails to get back to me because it makes me worry and feel ignored.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your feelings clearly and explain why you feel that way using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'cover many factor of my life'.

Example: To be honest, I feel quite tired and stressed when I have to do something for a long time, but I understand that patience in such situations helps me achieve better results in my life.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and off-topic. Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and explain why patience is important in your job or studies with examples.

Example: Although I am currently a student pursuing my B.Tech degree, patience is essential in my studies because it helps me focus and complete difficult tasks without giving up.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and explain clearly how you have become more patient with specific examples.

Example: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to wait calmly and complete my tasks without getting frustrated.

× Yes, of course, because I can wait for a while to collect my thing.

✓ Yes, of course, because I can wait for a while to collect my things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it is more natural to refer to multiple items when talking about personal belongings. Using singular 'thing' sounds unnatural in this context.

× The thing that make me impatient is the person who do not pick up my call or does not contact me afterwards.

✓ The thing that makes me impatient is the person who does not pick up my call or does not contact me afterwards.

The subject 'thing' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'does' not 'do'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× To be honest I feel very tired and a bit stressful for doing a thing for a long time, but it can cover many factor of my life in doing well.

✓ To be honest, I feel very tired and a bit stressed from doing a thing for a long time, but it can cover many factors of my life in doing well.

The adjective 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, but here the speaker wants to describe their feeling, so 'stressed' is correct. Also, 'for doing' should be 'from doing' to indicate cause. 'Factor' should be plural 'factors' because it refers to multiple aspects.

× As a restaurant, I'm not working anywhere or I'm only pursuing my B.Tech degree from a private university.

✓ I am not working anywhere as a restaurant; I am only pursuing my B.Tech degree from a private university.

'As a restaurant' is incorrect because a person cannot be a restaurant. The intended meaning is likely 'I am not working anywhere as a waiter' or similar. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs reordering for clarity.

× But in my life, to be patient, it is a more important skill than anything.

✓ But in my life, being patient is a more important skill than anything else.

'To be patient' should be changed to the gerund form 'being patient' to function as the subject. Also, 'more important skill than anything' is incomplete; 'anything else' is more natural.

× Patients require a person to be disciplined and more standard about their career.

✓ Patience requires a person to be disciplined and more standard about their career.

'Patients' is incorrect; the intended word is 'patience' (the quality of being patient). 'More standard' is unclear; possibly 'more consistent' or 'more serious' would be better, but as per instruction only grammar issues are corrected.

× Yes, of course, because in childhood we do not know about any patients that what is patient about and in at present I am already a patient person because I can wait and do my work without being frustrated.

✓ Yes, of course, because in childhood we did not know about any patience or what patience is about, and at present I am already a patient person because I can wait and do my work without being frustrated.

'Patients' should be 'patience' (the quality). 'Do not know' should be past tense 'did not know' because it refers to childhood. 'That what is patient about' is incorrect; it should be 'or what patience is about'. 'In at present' is incorrect; 'at present' is sufficient.