Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using proper sentence structure and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person now. When I was a child, I used to get frustrated easily, especially when working with others. However, as I have grown up, I have become more understanding and can wait calmly for people or situations.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is quite long and repetitive. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to make your answer clearer.

Example: I feel impatient when I wait for someone who is late despite agreeing on a specific time. For example, if I wait for an hour and they do not answer my calls, I become quite frustrated because it shows a lack of respect for my time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by adding more details and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and correct prepositions to sound more natural.

Example: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel anxious and bored. However, I try to stay patient because I know that perseverance is important to complete the task successfully.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, use correct vocabulary and expressions to improve clarity.

Example: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. For instance, when clients arrive late or speak impolitely, I have learned to remain calm and polite. This experience has helped me develop discipline and patience in difficult situations.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples. Also, avoid repeating similar words and try to use a wider range of vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I used to get frustrated and angry easily, and I often spoke rudely to others. However, with experience, I have become calmer, more understanding, and better at controlling my emotions.

× Yes, I am quite busy person talking about when I'm when I was a child I was not the same person I was to get frustrated while working anyone.

✓ Yes, I am quite a busy person. Talking about when I was a child, I was not the same person; I used to get frustrated while working with anyone.

The phrase 'quite busy person' is missing the article 'a' before 'busy person' which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, 'I was to get frustrated' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I used to get frustrated' to express past habitual action. Additionally, 'while working anyone' is missing the preposition 'with' to indicate working with someone.

× I was to get frustrated while working anyone.

✓ I used to get frustrated while working with anyone.

The verb 'working' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the person you are working alongside. Omitting 'with' makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× But if I grew up now I'm more passionate and I do have a habit of waiting for someone for.

✓ But now that I have grown up, I'm more passionate and I do have a habit of waiting for someone.

The phrase 'if I grew up now' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'now that I have grown up' to indicate a change over time. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'waiting for someone for' which is incomplete and should be corrected to 'waiting for someone'.

× I think when I'm waiting for people whom I have already told the exact time, but the person is not coming on time and makes you feel frustrated and you have waited someone at least about one hour and keep on calling and testing them and they won't reply.

✓ I think when I'm waiting for people whom I have already told the exact time, but the person does not come on time, it makes you feel frustrated. You have waited for someone for at least about one hour and keep on calling and texting them, but they don't reply.

The verb 'waited' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating the person waited for. Also, 'testing' is a typo and should be 'texting'. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. 'Person is not coming' should be 'person does not come' for present tense habitual action.

× keep on calling and testing them and they won't reply.

✓ keep on calling and texting them and they won't reply.

The word 'testing' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'texting' which means sending messages. This is a vocabulary error related to verb usage.

× I feel really anxious and quite bored about doing something for a longer time, but I have to maintain some patience to get over from it.

✓ I feel really anxious and quite bored about doing something for a long time, but I have to maintain some patience to get over it.

The phrase 'for a longer time' is better expressed as 'for a long time' to indicate duration. Also, 'get over from it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get over it' without 'from'.

× Yes, my job really required me to be really patient.

✓ Yes, my job really requires me to be really patient.

The question is about the present job requirement, so the present tense 'requires' should be used instead of past tense 'required'.

× It has taught me how to be patient and polite to the client if someone is coming late and talking with you some impolitely.

✓ It has taught me how to be patient and polite to the client if someone is coming late and talking to you impolitely.

The phrase 'talking with you some impolitely' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'talking to you' and 'some impolitely' should be 'impolitely' as an adverb modifying 'talking'.

× But I have to maintain my discipline and my patient with the heart of.

✓ But I have to maintain my discipline and my patience with a kind heart.

'My patient' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'my patience'. Also, 'with the heart of' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'with a kind heart' or similar expression.

× Yes, I am more patient compared to the past. When I was a child talking about my childhood, I was really frustrated and furious, anxious.

✓ Yes, I am more patient compared to the past. When I was a child, talking about my childhood, I was really frustrated, furious, and anxious.

The adjectives 'frustrated and furious, anxious' need commas to separate them properly. Also, adding 'and' before the last adjective is necessary for correct list punctuation.

× I was talking with people with rudely.

✓ I used to talk with people rudely.

The phrase 'talking with people with rudely' is incorrect. The correct form is 'talk with people rudely' or 'used to talk with people rudely'. The adverb 'rudely' should directly modify the verb without 'with'.

× I just get upset easily.

✓ I used to get upset easily.

Since the sentence refers to past behavior, 'used to get upset easily' is more appropriate than 'just get upset easily' which is present tense.