Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like 'from my perspective' which are redundant in spoken English. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more specific detail.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because when others try to annoy me, I stay calm and listen carefully to their point of view. This helps me understand them better and avoid conflicts.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words to explain your feelings logically. Also, avoid filler words and be specific about the situation that makes you impatient.

Example: I feel impatient when people act as if I don't know anything and promise to give me information later, but then they fail to do so. This makes me frustrated because I have to wait without any updates.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations and unclear statements. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I usually don't feel impatient when doing tasks for a long time because I enjoy activities like homework and schoolwork. Therefore, I can stay focused and even feel happy while working on them.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Avoid repeating words like 'my own' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to be more specific about the type of job and why patience is important.

Example: Although I don't have a job currently, I believe my future career will require patience because dealing with people and solving problems often takes time. With my patient personality, I think I will succeed in such a role.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain the comparison. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Example: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I better understand other people's points of view. This helps me control my reactions and be more reasonable in difficult situations.

× I think the, the thing that make me feel impatient was is when people ask me like if I know nothing or not and then they will tell me, uh, later.

✓ I think the thing that makes me feel impatient is when people ask me as if I know nothing and then they tell me, uh, later.

The subject 'thing' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, the tense should be consistent; 'was is' is incorrect and should be 'is' to match the present tense context. The phrase 'ask me like if I know nothing or not' is awkward; 'ask me as if I know nothing' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And then after Ava, they still did not give the information.

✓ And then after a while, they still did not give the information.

The phrase 'after Ava' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo; 'after a while' is the correct expression. The past tense 'did not give' is appropriate here, so no change needed for tense, only correction of the phrase for clarity.

× I couldn't even feel it. Very impatient, but only I would feel very happy because I'm a person who like doing tasks like especially, uh, homework, school works and like that.

✓ I don't even feel very impatient; instead, I feel very happy because I'm a person who likes doing tasks, especially homework, schoolwork, and similar things.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I couldn't even feel it' is vague; changing to 'I don't even feel very impatient' clarifies meaning. 'Who like doing' should be 'who likes doing' to agree with singular subject. 'School works' should be 'schoolwork' as it is an uncountable noun. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I believe that. But for myself, I don't think it's, uh, I don't feel very impatient to do things like that.

✓ So I believe that. But for myself, I don't think I feel very impatient doing things like that.

The phrase 'I don't feel very impatient to do things' is awkward; 'impatient doing things' is more natural. Also, removing unnecessary fillers improves clarity.

× Well, right now I don't have my own job, but in the future I think my own, my career or my job would require me to be more patient.

✓ Well, right now I don't have my own job, but in the future I think my career or job will require me to be more patient.

Using 'would' suggests conditional mood, but here a simple future 'will' is more appropriate to express a future expectation. Also, 'my own, my career or my job' is redundant; simplifying to 'my career or job' improves clarity.

× Between the comparison between me and when I was a child, I think that I'm more patient than before because I see more clear about people point of view.

✓ Comparing myself now to when I was a child, I think I am more patient because I see people's points of view more clearly.

The phrase 'Between the comparison between me and when I was a child' is redundant and awkward; 'Comparing myself now to when I was a child' is clearer. 'I see more clear about people point of view' is incorrect; it should be 'I see people's points of view more clearly' to use the correct adjective/adverb forms and possessive.

× So when I it came to myself, I also sometimes not really like, uh, reasonable.

✓ So when it comes to myself, I am sometimes not really reasonable.

The phrase 'when I it came to myself' is incorrect; it should be 'when it comes to myself'. Also, 'I also sometimes not really like, uh, reasonable' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I am sometimes not really reasonable' to use correct verb forms and word order.