Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and keep it under five sentences. Use linking words to add a brief example or reason. Correct verb forms and remove repeated words like "patient/ patiently."

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. When I face difficulties, I stay calm and focus on finding a practical solution. For example, if a project goes wrong, I break the problem into smaller steps and tackle them one by one.

Suggestion: Make the answer clearer and more specific. Give one or two concrete causes of impatience and use linking words (for example, because, when) to structure the response. Avoid vague phrases and complete your sentences.

Example: I become impatient when situations are chaotic or unclear. For example, when there are urgent problems both at work and at home at the same time, I find it hard to decide which to address first, which makes me feel stressed.

Suggestion: Use one clear topic sentence and provide a coherent supporting detail. Avoid fragmented examples and correct grammar (e.g., "go abroad"). Link motivation and patience with a brief reason or example.

Example: I usually feel motivated and patient when working on long-term tasks because I focus on the end goal. For instance, I studied for months to prepare for opportunities to go abroad, which kept me disciplined and persistent.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence and one specific reason or example describing how your job requires patience. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure.

Example: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because the procedures are strict and the workload is hectic. For example, I often need to handle complex paperwork under tight deadlines, which means I must stay calm and methodical.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add a brief reason or example of what changed. Use correct comparative phrasing and avoid repetition (e.g., "in my childhood" twice).

Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to manage stress and think before I react. For example, I used to respond angrily to setbacks, but now I pause and plan a solution.

× Obviously, I'm very patient and whenever I face any difficulties I stay calm and thinking about the solution patiently.

✓ Obviously, I'm very patient and whenever I face any difficulties I stay calm and think about the solution patiently.

The original sentence mixes the auxiliary 'stay' with a gerund 'thinking' where the base form 'think' is required to follow the co-occurring verb structure. Use the base form 'think' after 'stay' to form a coordinated predicate: 'stay calm and think'. Also ensure parallel structure when joining verbs with 'and'. Suggestion: maintain parallel verbs with the same form (stay calm and think).

× Actually, when I encounter difficulties, which is serious both sides in indoors and outdoors at the time, I feel very impatient and I can't select where I go and solve the.

✓ Actually, when I encounter serious difficulties either indoors or outdoors, I feel very impatient and I can't decide where to go and how to solve them.

The original has several structure and word-choice problems: the relative clause 'which is serious both sides in indoors and outdoors at the time' is ungrammatical; 'select where I go and solve the' is incomplete and missing objects. Correction simplifies the idea: 'serious difficulties either indoors or outdoors' and fixes verbs: 'can't decide where to go and how to solve them.' Use 'decide' for choice, include 'how' to introduce the solution method, and use 'them' to refer back to 'difficulties'.

× I feel very motivated and also patient and only dedicated to do something for a long time, for example. My goals like going to abroad.

✓ I feel very motivated and patient, and I am dedicated to doing something for a long time; for example, my goals include going abroad.

Problems: 'dedicated to do' requires a gerund after the preposition 'to' (dedicated to doing). 'My goals like going to abroad' uses incorrect verb and preposition: 'like' is wrong for listing and 'going to abroad' is ungrammatical — use 'include' and 'going abroad'. Also adjust punctuation and parallel structure. Suggestion: use gerund after 'to' when 'to' is a preposition, and use 'abroad' without 'to'.

× Definitely my job requires me to be patient very much because that works and rules are very strict and hectic, so I have to solve it patiently and maintain it patiently.

✓ Definitely my job requires me to be very patient because the work and rules are very strict and hectic, so I have to handle tasks patiently and maintain standards consistently.

Issues: 'requires me to be patient very much' is awkward; 'very much' should follow 'be' differently — better 'requires me to be very patient'. 'That works' is incorrect reference; use 'the work'. 'Solve it patiently' is vague; use 'handle tasks' and 'maintain standards'. Also avoid repeating 'patiently' twice. Suggestion: use precise nouns ('work', 'tasks') and tidy adverb placement (place adverb before adjective: 'very patient').

× At present I'm more patient compared to my childhood and in my childhood I was very impatient person but with the passage of time I changed my mood and mind.

✓ At present I'm more patient compared with when I was a child; I was a very impatient person then, but over time my attitude and outlook changed.

Problems: 'compared to my childhood' is awkward; compare with a time or 'when I was a child'. Missing article before 'very impatient person' ('a very impatient person'). 'Changed my mood and mind' is unnatural — use 'attitude and outlook' or simply 'my mindset changed'. Suggestion: use correct comparison structures ('compared with when I was a child'), include necessary articles, and choose natural collocations ('mindset', 'outlook').