Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide specific reasons with linking words. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the microwave because it saves me a lot of time when heating food. For example, I often use it to quickly warm leftovers instead of cooking from scratch. Moreover, it helps me avoid eating out, which can be expensive. Therefore, the microwave is very convenient for my daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about how these machines help in daily life.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives because they save us a lot of time. For instance, washing machines clean clothes quickly, allowing us to focus on other tasks. Additionally, these machines reduce physical effort, which is especially helpful for elderly parents. Therefore, they improve our quality of life significantly.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words.

Example: I sometimes read the instructions before using a machine. If I am familiar with the machine, I usually do not check the manual. However, if the machine is new to me, I always read the instructions carefully to ensure safety and proper use.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the main idea but lacks fluency and contains repetition. Use linking words and more formal expressions to improve coherence and clarity.

Example: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions carefully because they guide us to use machines correctly and ensure our safety. For example, following instructions can prevent accidents, such as injuries to our fingers. Therefore, people should always pay close attention to the instructions before operating any machine.

× Sometimes I don't cook for myself yes it's too time consuming and sometimes I don't want to dine out.

✓ Sometimes I don't cook for myself because it's too time-consuming and sometimes I don't want to dine out.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two ideas properly and 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Adding 'because' clarifies the reason and improves sentence flow.

× Also this is expensive so I may buy something to cook food and just.

✓ Also, eating out is expensive, so I may buy something to cook food at home.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'eating out is' clarifies what is expensive, and completing the sentence with 'to cook food at home' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, it's after the extremely important during our daily life because it's digital machines help us a lot, saves a lot of time so that we can use it for another purpose for also it can help our parents to do this health work.

✓ Yes, they are extremely important in our daily life because these digital machines help us a lot and save a lot of time so that we can use it for other purposes. Also, they can help our parents do this hard work.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues, including incorrect word order, unclear pronouns, and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns, verb forms, and sentence segmentation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, it's after the extremely important during our daily life because it's digital machines help us a lot, saves a lot of time so that we can use it for another purpose for also it can help our parents to do this health work.

✓ Yes, they are extremely important in our daily life because these digital machines help us a lot and save a lot of time so that we can use it for other purposes. Also, they can help our parents do this hard work.

The phrase 'after the extremely important during' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to 'in our daily life'. Also, 'for another purpose' should be 'for other purposes' to be idiomatic.

× Oh, sometimes it depends if the machine is very.

✓ Oh, sometimes it depends if I am very familiar with the machine.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The pronoun 'it' is vague, and the phrase 'if the machine is very' is incomplete. Clarifying with 'if I am very familiar with the machine' makes the sentence meaningful.

× If I am very with the mail with the machine I probably won't check out the instructions.

✓ If I am very familiar with the machine, I probably won't check the instructions.

The phrase 'very with the mail with the machine' is incorrect and confusing. Replacing it with 'very familiar with the machine' corrects the pronoun and phrase usage.

× But if this is if the machine is new to me, then I will check it because of safety issues.

✓ But if the machine is new to me, then I will check the instructions because of safety issues.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing ('if this is if'). Simplifying to 'if the machine is new to me' and specifying 'check the instructions' improves clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, it is very important for us to carefully with the instruction because the instructions guide us to use the machine correctly and it protect our safety also.

✓ Yeah, it is very important for us to be careful with the instructions because the instructions guide us to use the machine correctly and they protect our safety as well.

The phrase 'to carefully with the instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'to be careful with the instructions'. Also, 'it protect' should be 'they protect' to agree with the plural noun 'instructions'.

× ...and it protect our safety also.

✓ ...and they protect our safety as well.

The subject 'instructions' is plural, so the verb should be 'protect' with 'they' as the pronoun, not 'it protect'.

× That's the most important. We don't want to lose our fingers when we use the machine, right? Yeah. So I think people should really carefully.

✓ That's the most important. We don't want to lose our fingers when we use the machine, right? Yeah. So I think people should be really careful.

The phrase 'people should really carefully' is incorrect because 'carefully' is an adverb and needs a verb to modify. Changing it to 'people should be really careful' uses the adjective correctly after the verb 'be'.