Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“help me washing dishes”应为“help me wash dishes”。建议使用更简洁自然的表达，并避免重复。

Example: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time after meals and is very easy to use.

Suggestion: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多，且缺乏连贯的逻辑。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体理由支持，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they clean thoroughly and save us time. For example, machines can reach places we might miss when cleaning by hand.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“need with the instructions”应为“need to read the instructions”。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they can be complicated. Without reading them, I might use the machine incorrectly and cause problems.

Suggestion: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“in a deep”应为“in depth”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, reading instructions is very important because they show us the correct way to use machines. This helps us save time and understand the machine better.

× My favorite machine is a machine that can help me washing dishes after we have lunch or if we are cooking.

✓ My favorite machine is a machine that can help me wash dishes after we have lunch or if we are cooking.

动词help后面应接动词原形wash，而不是动名词washing。动词help后接动词原形是正确用法。

× Yes, it is important, because washing machines have a lot of steps to clean my dishes or balls.

✓ Yes, they are important, because washing machines have a lot of steps to clean my dishes or bowls.

主语washing machines是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。单数it与复数machines不一致。单词balls应为bowls，表示碗。

× It may it can do better than washing them by ourselves, because we sometimes careless, we sometimes become careless all week lost attention about some dirty places.

✓ It may be able to do better than washing them by ourselves, because we are sometimes careless; we sometimes lose attention to some dirty places all week.

句中重复使用it may it can不正确，应改为it may be able to。careless是形容词，需用be动词are。动词lose注意时态和用法。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Of course I need with the instructions because machines are very complex.

✓ Of course I need the instructions because machines are very complex.

动词need后不接介词with，直接接宾语instructions。

× Sometimes if I don't read the instruction I can use them in the right way.

✓ Sometimes if I don't read the instructions, I cannot use them in the right way.

instruction应为复数instructions，且否定句中用cannot表示不能。

× Maybe I could cause some mistakes or I can't get the ideal ideal.

✓ Maybe I could cause some mistakes or I can't get the ideal result.

句中重复使用ideal，应改为ideal result，表达更准确。

× Instructions always teach me how to use the machine in the right way.

✓ Instructions always teach me how to use the machine in the right way.

该句无语法错误，保持不变。

× And if we read the instruction, we will save time to search for how to use this machine and we could understand this machine in a deep.

✓ And if we read the instructions, we will save time searching for how to use this machine and we could understand this machine deeply.

instruction应为复数instructions。save time后接动名词searching。in a deep应改为副词deeply。