Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, explain why the juicer is important to you and how it benefits you.

Example: My favourite machine at home is my juicer because it helps me prepare fresh juice quickly. Earlier, I used to go outside to buy juice whenever I craved it, but now I can make it myself easily at home, which saves time and money.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'sewing machine' instead of 'sweeping machine' if you mean that. Try to be more concise and clear.

Example: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because people nowadays have busy schedules. Therefore, these machines help them complete household chores quickly and efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use correct tenses and plural forms. Be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Example: Usually, I do not read the instructions before using a machine because I find it time-consuming. However, if I face difficulties operating it, I then read the instructions carefully to avoid any accidents.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your points. Also, use correct verb forms and plural nouns. Make your answer more natural and clear.

Example: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially when using a machine for the first time. Reading instructions helps users understand how to operate the machine safely and correctly.

× Because as earlier I go to outside whenever I craving for juice, but now I don't need to go outside.

✓ Because earlier I used to go outside whenever I craved juice, but now I don't need to go outside.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'as earlier' and 'whenever I craving' which are grammatically incorrect. 'As earlier' should be 'earlier' or 'used to', and 'whenever I craving' should be 'whenever I craved' to match past tense. Also, 'go to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'go outside'. The corrected sentence uses proper past tense and correct prepositional usage.

× Yes Sir, I think washing machine and sewing machine are important because now people have not enough time to do work manually.

✓ Yes Sir, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because now people do not have enough time to do work manually.

The original sentence uses singular 'washing machine and sewing machine' when referring to machines in general, so plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines' is appropriate. Also, 'sewing machine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine' as per the question. Additionally, 'have not enough time' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have enough time'.

× That's why they require machines to do their works very easily and effectively.

✓ That's why they require machines to do their work very easily and effectively.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context and should not be pluralized. Also, 'to do their work' is the correct phrase. The preposition usage is correct, but the noun form needed correction.

× On the other side, the people have not enough time due to they engaged in their hectic and busy schedule.

✓ On the other hand, people do not have enough time because they are engaged in their hectic and busy schedules.

The phrase 'On the other side' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'On the other hand'. 'Have not enough time' should be 'do not have enough time'. 'Due to they engaged' is incorrect; it should be 'because they are engaged'. Also, 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to match 'people'.

× To be honest, I didn't pay any attention towards the instructions before using a machine.

✓ To be honest, I didn't pay any attention to the instructions before using a machine.

The phrase 'pay attention towards' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'pay attention to'. The past tense 'didn't pay' is correct here.

× But sometime whenever I am not able to control and operate the machinery, then I give the priority to read the instruction and it is the best way to avoid any mishappening.

✓ But sometimes, whenever I am not able to control and operate the machinery, I give priority to reading the instructions, and it is the best way to avoid any mishaps.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Give the priority to read' is incorrect; it should be 'give priority to reading'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Mishappening' is not commonly used; 'mishaps' is more appropriate.

× Yes, in my view, it is crucial to read the instructions because sometime the person used a, a machine that, uh, is the first time in their life.

✓ Yes, in my view, it is crucial to read the instructions because sometimes a person uses a machine for the first time in their life.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'The person used a, a machine that, uh, is the first time' is incorrect; it should be 'a person uses a machine for the first time'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct tense.

× That's why I think they should need to read the instruction and it helpful for them because it provide them safety and about the role to.

✓ That's why I think they need to read the instructions, and it is helpful for them because it provides safety and explains the role as well.

'They should need to' is incorrect; 'they need to' is sufficient. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'It helpful' should be 'it is helpful'. 'It provide' should be 'it provides'. The phrase 'about the role to' is unclear and corrected to 'explains the role as well' for clarity.