Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent. Try to avoid simple sentences and expand your response with reasons or examples.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the printing machine because I often need to print journal articles for my studies. It saves me a lot of time compared to going to a library, and it is very convenient to have it at home.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why these machines are important.

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save people a lot of time. For example, washing machines clean clothes more thoroughly than hand washing, and sweeping machines make cleaning floors much easier and faster.

Suggestion: Your answer is direct but could be improved by adding more detail and linking words to explain why reading instructions is important.

Example: Definitely, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and effectively. Without reading them, I might misuse the machine or damage it.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your answer with clear linking words and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because if you don't, you might use the machine incorrectly, which can cause mistakes or even damage the machine. For instance, not following safety guidelines could lead to accidents.

× Yes, because they really save people a lot of time and washing machines and usually wash better than hands and so does the sweeping machines.

✓ Yes, because they really save people a lot of time and washing machines usually wash better than hands, and so do sweeping machines.

The sentence has issues with singular and plural forms. 'Washing machines and usually wash' is incorrect because 'and' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. Also, 'so does the sweeping machines' is incorrect because 'does' is singular but 'machines' is plural; it should be 'so do sweeping machines'. Removing the extra 'and' and correcting the verb agreement improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sure, and sometimes if you don't read the instructions, you don't know how to use it.

✓ Sure, and sometimes if you don't read the instructions, you don't know how to use them.

The pronoun 'it' is used incorrectly to refer to 'instructions', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number with the plural noun 'instructions'.

× And sometimes if you don't read it, there may be some mistakes and sometimes it will be in a big trouble.

✓ And sometimes if you don't read them, there may be some mistakes and sometimes it will cause big trouble.

Again, 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'instructions' which is plural; 'them' is correct. Also, 'it will be in a big trouble' is ungrammatical; the phrase should be 'it will cause big trouble' to express the intended meaning properly.