Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'cook' and 'cooking', you can use synonyms or rephrase. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the Instant Pot because I enjoy cooking. It helps me prepare complex dishes, such as stewed beef, quickly and conveniently, saving me a lot of time.

Suggestion: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and avoid repetition. Use linking words to compare the importance of the two machines clearly. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Washing machines are definitely important because they save a lot of time and effort compared to washing clothes by hand. On the other hand, sweeping machines can be useful sometimes, but since we can sweep manually, they are less essential.

Suggestion: Your answer is direct and relevant, but you can improve by using plural forms correctly and adding linking words to make the sentence flow better.

Example: I always read the instructions before using machines because it helps me operate them properly and safely.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating ideas and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your points logically and be more concise.

Example: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because it ensures safety when operating machines, which is the most important consideration.

× My favorite machine is the Instant Pot because I like cooking and the instant pot can help me to cook some complicated dishes, for example some Stew of stewing beef.

✓ My favorite machine is the Instant Pot because I like cooking and the Instant Pot can help me to cook some complicated dishes, for example some stews of stewing beef.

The word 'stew' should be pluralized to 'stews' to correctly refer to multiple dishes. Also, 'Instant Pot' should be capitalized consistently as it is a proper noun.

× I always read the instruction before I use the machines because I think it is better to read the instruction and use it properly and safely.

✓ I always read the instructions before I use the machines because I think it is better to read the instructions and use them properly and safely.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, the pronoun 'it' should be changed to 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'instructions'.

× I think it is very important to read the instructions before we use the machines because it involves many safety issues.

✓ I think it is very important to read the instructions before we use the machines because they involve many safety issues.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to the plural noun 'instructions'. It should be changed to 'they' to agree in number.

× I think safety is the most important things when we use the when we operate the machines.

✓ I think safety is the most important thing when we operate the machines.

The phrase 'most important things' should be singular 'most important thing' because 'safety' is singular. Also, the repeated phrase 'when we use the when we operate the machines' should be corrected to 'when we operate the machines' for clarity and correctness.