Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with sentence structure and vocabulary to sound more natural.

Example: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I spend about 30 to 35% of my time studying on it. Additionally, I watch movies on it to relax after studying, which helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition. Also, check word choice and grammar for better clarity.

Example: I believe the importance of washing and sweeping machines depends on the household. Although we don't have them in my home, having a washing machine would save my mother and me a lot of time since we wouldn't need to do laundry manually. Similarly, a sweeping machine would make cleaning easier and more efficient.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Avoid filler words and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be careful with verb forms and sentence construction.

Example: I usually read the instructions before using a machine if it is unfamiliar to me. However, sometimes I avoid reading them when they are too complicated. If the instructions help me understand how the machine works, I make sure to read them carefully.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more fluent and natural.

Example: I believe it is important to read the instructions because the manual contains specific guidelines on what we should or should not do with the machine. By following these instructions, we can use the machine effectively and efficiently.

× I use my 30 and 35% of time studying on it and sometimes I watch movie and that's how I remove my bottom.

✓ I use 30 to 35% of my time studying on it and sometimes I watch movies and that's how I relax.

The phrase '30 and 35% of time' is incorrect; it should be '30 to 35% of my time' to indicate a range and possessive form. 'Watch movie' should be plural 'watch movies' because 'movie' is countable and plural is needed here. 'Remove my bottom' is incorrect idiomatically; 'relax' is a better choice to express unwinding.

× Like if we have washing machine we don't have time always to do laundry and souping machine are great.

✓ Like if we have a washing machine, we don't always have time to do laundry and sweeping machines are great.

'Washing machine' needs an article 'a' because it is singular countable noun. 'Souping machine' is a misspelling; it should be 'sweeping machine'. Also, 'souping machine are great' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'sweeping machines are great' (plural noun with plural verb). 'Don't have time always' is better as 'don't always have time' for correct adverb placement.

× Is I usually do reading instruction before using a machine if it's unfamiliar to me, but sometimes I avoid reading on the instruction when it's get complicated.

✓ I usually read the instructions before using a machine if it's unfamiliar to me, but sometimes I avoid reading the instructions when they get complicated.

The sentence starts incorrectly with 'Is I'. It should start with 'I'. 'Do reading instruction' is incorrect; the verb 'read' is used instead. 'Reading on the instruction' is incorrect preposition use; it should be 'reading the instructions'. 'It's get complicated' is wrong verb form; it should be 'they get complicated' because 'instructions' is plural.

× Uh, if the instruction help me to realize the techniques and the working procedure of that.

✓ Uh, if the instructions help me to understand the techniques and the working procedure of that.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. 'Help' should be 'help' (plural subject with plural verb is correct). 'Realize' is not the best verb here; 'understand' fits better in this context.

× I think it's important to read the instruction because in the manual there is some specific things that we shouldn't do with that machine or specific way we should do the thing to use that machine effectively.

✓ I think it's important to read the instructions because in the manual there are some specific things that we shouldn't do with that machine or specific ways we should do things to use that machine effectively.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'There is some specific things' is incorrect; it should be 'there are some specific things' because 'things' is plural. 'Specific way' should be plural 'specific ways' to match 'things'. 'Do the thing' should be 'do things' for general meaning.