Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”、“so”等，并补充更多具体细节，使回答更丰富自然。

Example: My favourite machine at home is the microwave because it helps me heat my food quickly, especially when I am in a hurry to go to school. For example, I can prepare my breakfast in just a few minutes, which saves me a lot of time.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够清晰，逻辑有些混乱，且缺少连接词。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词如“however”、“although”，并提供具体原因和例子。

Example: Although washing machines cannot clean clothes perfectly, I think they are important because they save me a lot of time when I am busy with schoolwork. For example, I can do laundry while studying.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然，缺少连贯性。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词如“but”、“however”，并丰富细节。

Example: I usually don't read the instructions because I find them unimportant. However, when I use a complex machine, I sometimes read the instructions carefully to avoid mistakes.

Suggestion: 回答表达不清晰，逻辑混乱，且用词不当。建议明确表达自己的观点，使用恰当的连接词如“on the one hand... on the other hand...”，并用更准确的词汇。

Example: I agree that it is important to read instructions before using complex machines to avoid problems. On the other hand, for simple machines, you can use them directly if you feel confident.

× But sometimes I could read the instruction before I using a complex machine.

✓ But sometimes I could read the instruction before I use a complex machine.

这里的动词应该用原形，因为情态动词could后面接动词原形，而不是动名词。

× No, I seldom read the instruction because I think it's unimportant for me.

✓ No, I seldom read the instructions because I think they're unimportant for me.

instruction是可数名词，通常用复数形式instructions表示说明书，且前面需要用复数形式的冠词或无冠词。

× On the other hand, you could straightly use a machine before you think OK.

✓ On the other hand, you could use a machine directly before you think OK.

副词straightly用法不正确，正确的副词是directly，且副词应放在动词use之后。