Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like 'which is named, which I've named'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'And sometimes when it gets stuck, I talk to it and encourage it to move on', you could say 'Moreover, when it gets stuck, I encourage it to continue working.'

Example: My favorite machine at home is my robot vacuum cleaner, which I've named Scarlet. It helps me keep the floors clean effortlessly. Moreover, when it gets stuck, I encourage it to continue working. I really appreciate how it saves me time and effort.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'They say a lot of time and energy for us' and 'we are doing another important jobs behind it'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are indispensable members of our household because they save us a lot of time and energy. Therefore, we can focus on other important tasks while these machines do the work for us.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. For example, explain that although you sometimes skip instructions, you realize it is a mistake because instructions can be specific and important.

Example: I strongly believe that instructions are important. However, sometimes I use machines without reading them. I used to think it was fine, but now I realize it's a big mistake because instructions often contain specific guidelines that are necessary to follow.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and has some hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to be more concise and fluent, avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Yes, I strongly believe it is important to read instructions before using a machine because they provide specific guidelines. Although I sometimes skip them, I now understand that doing so is a big mistake.

× My favorite machine at home is my vacuum cleaner, robot vacuum cleaner, which is named, which I've named Scarlet.

✓ My favorite machine at home is my vacuum cleaner, a robot vacuum cleaner, which I've named Scarlet.

The phrase 'which is named' is redundant and awkward here. Using 'which I've named Scarlet' is sufficient and grammatically correct. Also, adding the article 'a' before 'robot vacuum cleaner' is necessary to specify the noun properly.

× It helps me to keep, uh, keep uh, floors clean effortlessly.

✓ It helps me keep the floors clean effortlessly.

The sentence has unnecessary repetition and filler words ('uh'). Also, 'to keep' followed by 'keep' is redundant. The correct structure is 'helps me keep' without 'to'. Adding the definite article 'the' before 'floors' is also necessary.

× And sometimes when it gets stuck, I talk to it and encourage it to move on.

✓ Sometimes, when it gets stuck, I talk to it and encourage it to move on.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and often unnecessary. Removing 'And' improves sentence flow. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× I really appreciate.

✓ I really appreciate it.

The verb 'appreciate' requires an object. Without an object, the sentence is incomplete. Adding 'it' clarifies what is appreciated.

× Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are indispensable and essential members of our our family and our household.

✓ Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are indispensable and essential members of our family and household.

The word 'our' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'our' corrects the sentence.

× They say a lot of time and energy for us and we are doing another important jobs behind it.

✓ They save a lot of time and energy for us, and we can do other important jobs because of them.

The original sentence has incorrect verb usage ('say' instead of 'save'), awkward phrasing, and subject-verb agreement issues. Correcting 'say' to 'save', adjusting the phrase to 'do other important jobs', and clarifying the meaning improves the sentence.

× I strongly believe that the instructions are important, but sometimes I use them without reading instructions.

✓ I strongly believe that the instructions are important, but sometimes I use machines without reading the instructions.

The pronoun 'them' is ambiguous here. Clarifying that 'them' refers to 'machines' improves clarity. Also, adding 'the' before 'instructions' is necessary.

× Before I used to know an instruction how to use it, but I think it's a very big mistake because sometimes they have specific instructions and all the instructions are not.

✓ Before, I used to know how to use it without instructions, but I think that was a big mistake because sometimes machines have specific instructions, and not all instructions are the same.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. 'Used to know an instruction how to use it' is awkward. Rephrasing to 'used to know how to use it without instructions' clarifies meaning. Also, the sentence is split for clarity and corrected for grammar.

× Yes, I strongly believe that reading instructions before use, uh, some, umm, technique.

✓ Yes, I strongly believe that reading instructions before use is important for some techniques.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'is important for some techniques' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× It's important because they have specific guidelines and follow these guidelines.

✓ It's important because instructions have specific guidelines, and following these guidelines is necessary.

The original sentence lacks clarity about what 'they' refers to. Specifying 'instructions' and clarifying the action improves the sentence.

× Sometimes I use it without instruction, but I think it's big mistake.

✓ Sometimes I use machines without instructions, but I think it's a big mistake.

The singular 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match common usage. Also, adding the article 'a' before 'big mistake' is necessary.