Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and try to provide a reason to enrich your response. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail using linking words.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions, which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific about how these machines help in daily life.

Example: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and allow us to focus on other important tasks at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using plural forms correctly and adding linking words for coherence. Also, try to avoid repeating the word 'instruction' and use synonyms or pronouns.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using machines because they help me understand how to operate them safely and effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer has some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase and use varied vocabulary.

Example: Yes, reading instructions is crucial because it provides valuable information about the machine's proper use and safety precautions.

× There are a lot of the machine in my home, but my favorite machine is a washing machine.

✓ There are a lot of machines in my home, but my favorite machine is a washing machine.

The phrase 'a lot of the machine' is incorrect because 'machine' is singular and 'a lot of' requires a plural noun. The correct plural form 'machines' should be used here.

× Yes. I think that the washing machines and uh both yes, I think that uh both machines are very important in the house.

✓ Yes. I think that both the washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in the house.

The original sentence is unclear and redundant. 'Both' should be followed by the two items it refers to, and 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should both be plural to match the context.

× With the help of these machines, we can save our time and also also do a pending task uh during uh this during with this machines.

✓ With the help of these machines, we can save our time and also do pending tasks during this time.

The phrase 'do a pending task uh during uh this during with this machines' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. 'During this time' is the correct prepositional phrase, and 'pending tasks' should be plural to match the context.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using the machines because when we read all the instruction then we can easily get how to start and how to stop the machine and all the other instructions.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using the machines because when we read all the instructions, we can easily understand how to start and stop the machine and all the other instructions.

'Instruction' should be plural as 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'get how to start' is awkward; 'understand how to start' is more appropriate.

× Yes to yeah, yes, it is a very important to read the instructions as when we read the instructions we gain a lot of knowledge about the machine.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because when we read them, we gain a lot of knowledge about the machine.

The phrase 'a very important' is incorrect because 'important' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'as when' is awkward; 'because' is clearer. 'Read the instructions' can be shortened to 'read them' for conciseness.

× So that's why it is a very crucial for each and everyone person.

✓ So that's why it is very crucial for every person.

'A very crucial' is incorrect because 'crucial' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'each and everyone person' is redundant; 'every person' is the correct phrase.